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for In The Eyes of Your God

by dreamers

schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I found this chapter disturbing, but fascinating. I'm really looking forward to seeing where you go with it.
schedule February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You shocked me with that one, I don't know what to say. Well from the way that Sasuke had described Naruto in the beginning, I thought he was an angel like Sasuke did. When he get up and walked away, I thought nothing of it maybe he had to use the restroom. But when we finally got to see what he was actually doing I was both amazed and disgusted. When it was all over he seemed to be the angel again and I think maybe he is possessed by a demon and he is always waking up into these situations and that is why he is praying all the time. The demon obviously can't come out all the time, thankfully, so maybe there is hope for our angel. When I first started reading this story, I thought Naruto would be Sasuke's light at the end of the tunnel but I after reading I think it may be the other way around. The scene you wrote was pretty intense and it might not be everyone's cup of tea but the writing is top notch and I can't wait to read more of this.
person Repanse
schedule February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM

O__O That was scary... XD
person Leeana69
schedule February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SO GOOD!! >.<

I love psycho Naruto. He's amazing. You did such a good job with him. Now I'm all eager and wanting to know what's gonna happen to Sasuke.

:3
schedule February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit!!! ((O_O))

Oh my god! I mean OH MY GOD!!! That was intensely amazing!!! Fantastic job! I read through that thing with so much shock it was incredible!!
I can't wait for your next update. This was incredibly good.
Keep up the great work!