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for What He Wants

by redqueen

schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous. A story with plot AND sex...and a good plot to boot. You make it seem very plausable. Again I say brava. Now...onto the sequel.
person MsSmokey
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why more people haven't caught on to your story yet, but i hope they do, because it should be known! Well done for creating a fanfiction that actually had a really interesting story which made complete sense. This is what i search for when reading a story!
person sris
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've only read the first chapter, but will read the rest when I have the time. The story seems very interesting, though I think I know what the main twist will be... Still, I'm very intrigued. You've got a nice angle and, I believe, a thrilling plot planned for my favourite pairing. Not to mention your writing, which is a pleasure to read even by itself. I look forward to read the rest, and will review again as I do. Thanks for sharing What He Wants.