rate_review Reviews

Absolutely marvelous!!! Great job! xD

Second time I read this. *grin* And this time I review. *rubs back of neck* Because I really have to become better at that... But since I'm bad at telling what I feel about stuff I'll just throw a couple of quotes at you. I could quote much more but this is what you get. *smile*

He should just trap a rabbit. When he got home, he would stuff it, thereby fulfilling the child-friendly portion, and then show his father how ‘aggressive’ the animal could be when he threw it at the old man’s face.
*snort* I can really picture Sasuke throwing a stuffed rabbit at Fugaku's face. XD

“Perfect,” Sasuke mumbled and pulled his hood tighter around his face. “Somehow I thought with you in tow finding Naruto wouldn’t be a problem.” A small yip. “I thought I’d immediately find that fucking crazy castle.” A more assertive yip. “But my month is nearly up and, once again, I find myself FUCKING LOST!!” he screamed into the night and Kyuubi clawed at his chest, working to pop his head through the wet folds of his cloak.
Watch it, Sas! Your Uchiha is slipping. *smirk*

“Two, Father,” Sasuke corrected and Naruto cheerily held up two fingers as a visual representation.
This line is just win. *laugh*

Thanks for writing this. I remember hearing the original story as a kid once, but maybe I should read it. *ponders*
As usual your writing is amazing and I enjoyed very much.

After reading both your renditions of Bearskin and The Queen Cat, and then the originals, I find myself liking yours a lot more. Then again, old-fashioned faerie tales don't really go into much, unlike you. And, of course, the boy-love is also a definite bonus! >.< I can't wait to see if you do more Twisted Fairytales in the future--they would certainly make my day. ^.^

I seriously LOVE everything you've ever written. But I am most enamored with your "fairytales". They are the most original and enering pieces I have yet to read and you tell the story in such a beautiful way, keeping the story vaugue enough to be a fairtail but giving enough detail to satify the reader. I Always loved fairytales and wished for more indepth sight to the main characters and you did that with this, that and its my favorite Yaoi couple of all time playing these amazing roles... utter brilliance. Okay now that' I've gushed over the topic let me go on to the story...
I Loved it obviously, but I very much liked Sai in this one and his, "WAit! What, no hugs?!" Comment. It made me laugh out loud and made my neighbors ask if I was okay... Kakashi's character was very nice, he was cunning and amused me greatly, as did Sakura and her, "Oh my GOD your Beaut.... cold." Brilliance, utter, brilliance. I felt it was a very well told story and the curse (Though condilludied as you stated) wprked extreamely well and being a fairy tale it was adequite without being too over the top, and personally I liked it so, two thumbs up there. And as always your ending left me grinning from ear to ear! ^-^
"A Kingdom? Well I HAve two...."
BEst Line EVER!!!!

That was adorable!!

I'm pretty sure that I've actually read a version of that particular fairytale where the magical creature in question was a fox, too.

But maybe that's because I read far too many fractured fairytales with gay heroes.

Anyway, this particular rendition made me very happy indeed. Thanks!

THIS STORY TOTALLY ROCKS!!!!
I enjoy every minute of it, very well
written.

Absolutely beautiful

I like your version of this tale much much more. Great job! That was very sweet and a lot of fun to read.

That was a very wonderfull story to read!)

Wow that was fantastic. I think I saw 1 spelling mistake, in the first chapter, but I have no idea where it is now and its not important. I realize that might be frustrating but seriously, its not a problem. The only reason I saw it was because I was supposed to be editing a paper of mine and have been in an editing mindset. All that being said, I love it! Your Sasuke is so... Sasuke. He's cold without really being cold, and his emotions come through clearly, despite that you don't really mention them, ever. Naruto is as vibrant as ever, and I loved Sai! That is quite a feat because I really hate him in the manga. Awesome story, I look forward to more work from you.

I have read MANY stories on this site as well as others and never once have I found a story that touches my heart AND gives me a nosebleed =D Most of the time the stories i find are either purely sexy or purely lovely-dovey haha, either that or they have terrrrrible grammer!! You managed to combine everything into this unbelievably well written, sexy as hell, fairytale! The best part though, was that i was on my toes the whole time trying to figure out the riddle of Naruto's behavior!!!! (I love a good puzzle mixed with some sexy smut haha!) I sincerely hope you keep writing and coming up with more amazing creative ideas, and they better all have hot narusasu scenes in them as well!!!!! Thank you for writing this story because i truly enjoyed reading it! =D