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for Illuminating Heaven

by subtextual

person RedefiningAndrogyny
schedule December 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I must say, this is not a story to be read in one day. By the end I was all but in tears, my core shaken from this fanfiction. It's rare that I find something that touches me this way, and it was all accomplished without the three cliché words. This story has a very special place in my heart now. Thank you.
person ficfanatic
schedule May 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this story of them coming together. I was suprised by this because I usually only want Kak with Iruka. I think this story written any other way would not give it the impact it has here.
schedule February 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i can do nothing else but stand and clap, breathlessly. i haven't read or watched naruto since ep. 150, roughly. it's no use. its real story can sadly be never as good as the fanfictions written of it, of which yours is one absolutely breathtaking example.
thank you!
person sassynu
schedule December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow your last words were so deep the whole thing was really deep and I love that stuff not the depressing kind of deep but a joyous deep I'm tired of depressing and you really put something else in the undertones of the whole thing it was just awesome a great read I could barely stop reading it because it held me in a place of woah and awe and cool stuff like that I've never heard the song you used but I did have my own soundtrack, use somebody the paramore cover and a song wide awake from kitchie nadal no real reason just that that was what I was listening to but it did inhance the pure pleasure of just reading this story wrapped up in my own little bubble of this world of emotions I was brought into so, great story I also love the pairing and you do a great job of Sasuke/Kakashi bonding, and I'm glad I found the story. And yes it did help me open my eyes to better possibilities in life.
person cynaga
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
chapter 10 poetry

luv the POV you wrote bravo
person Jennifer
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
amazing

the way everything fit together was brilliant

keep writing, your work is worth reading a million times over
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww thanks for the shout-out. It really was unnecessary cuz all I did was say "I love this" the entire time, but hey if that helped, GOOD! XD

I love Illuminating Heaven and will love reading your future oneshots!!!! ♥
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this! And I LOVE you!

Short and simple, no? XD

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
person jaq
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really have been enjoying this story - you're probably one of the more talented people writing fanfiction for this fandom, and particularlu this pairing. But may I ask - what sort of post-canon universe are you envisioning here? I mean, does Kakashi know about the whole thing with Itachi being ordered to kill the clan? Does Sasuke? How close to canon are you staying?

Just something that's been at the back of my mind.
person jaq
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, crap, I hope I didn't just spoil you with that review. Uh, if you aren't reading the manga scanlations online, DO NOT READ THE REVIEW I JUST LEFT. Sorry, it just now occured to me that you might be a Shonen Jump reader only. >_<