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April 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG. Cliffhanger. Dammit. Withdrawal. Setting in. ffuuuuhhhh I can't even... O.o
*whimpers*
*whimpers*
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November 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It was even better than your previous story! You added more action and some really hot scenes (the one with Iruka&Gaara was amazing!)I won't go thru all details, I just want you to know that I think your story is simply great, it's good enough to make a book. It's been 4 years between your first story and next ones so I still have hope that you're active on this web and will finish this story... If you read this review, please finish! I'm sure that there are lots of people who would be very happy to read next chapters!
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September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Everything I said about What He Wants applies to this one, too, with the added bonus of an intriguing mystery. There's a clue in plain sight, but I'd be fascinated to see whether it's a red herring and how it plays out. Is the rest of this story posted somewhere else?
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September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just on the off-chance you still get notifications on reviews (and ideally have good news about the rest of the story!), you can get me at sapphire496-grey@yahoo.co.uk and I would *love* to hear from you.
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May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So I've now found and reread this story and got to chapter twelve where there is no ending. If you have the ending somewhere else please let me know. I real really want to know what happens. You have left iruka in such a state that I'm left floundering at where you could be going with this stories. However since I see that you have not posted since 2009, I doubt that I ever will see the end of this one. This is simply an impassioned plea to finish your story.
Serpensortia
Serpensortia06@gmail.com
Serpensortia
Serpensortia06@gmail.com
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April 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So just finished reading what you have posted so far, and this is the most interesting Iruka Kakashi story i've come across in a long time. I'm looking forward to reading more. I have you booked marked. ^_^
Serpen
Serpen
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March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please don't tell me you stopped D: i love this story and i loved your first one T_T it's amazingly good.
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November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are the best author EVER! I love this story. I didn't think I could love one any more then this! I admit I got a little stuck on the part where Iruka was reading the background info. but now....I just read chapter 7 and am in awe. That is so Gaara, you described him exactly how he looks in my head. It's wonderful. I even like the part where Dragon exits...ah...it is wonderful. Even the bathtub is wonderful. I would like to continue to sing your praises but their are more wonderful chapters for me to read.
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November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You've really tapped into the grit of what it must be to be anbu. that chapter was as horrible as it was good. Iruka as a captain? Sounds cool...but i can understand where kakashi is coming from.
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November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kakashi! is so cute i love him. i wonder how that guy iruka met will fit in.