rate_review Reviews

He got shot!!! OMG! I can't wait to find out what is going to happen next! I knew that guy had something going on..still not sure if he is the one they are going after. But either way. I really hope that this story gets an update soon! I know you said it was coming to you like a trickle. Anything I can do to make it go faster! Anything! If you say you need a dancing monkey I will find a way to send it to you!

woah, I've read both What He Wants and this story in one go (well, not really one go, it took me a few days, because I'm a slow reader) and man.. I love it xD You really know how to build a story. I love how the relation between Iruka and Kakashi gets stronger and stronger.
and now I really want to know what happens next! So I hope you'll update soon xD

yes, life does get in the way.

please don't consider ending this:(
even if you write just for me!!!!!

this is such an original story that it can be removed from the anime genre
and it would be worth every letter to read:)

your stylizing and the flow of your dialogue, your dynamics between characters,
and the characterizations themselves are wonderful. there really is a beauty to your writing.
I hope you want to see this through to it's fruition, obviously I do.

evil cliff-hanger!
your twistedness is starting to show -
I remember what you did to Iruka in "What He Wants"...

Kakashi wrath yeah! the soul bond should make this interesting.

is Philip based on any one, or is he strictly oc?

thank you for the great chapter:)

Holy Shit! What's gonna happen to Iruka! I must know! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeease update!

chapter 2
What did kakashi do in that office???!!! Sounds scary, i'm happy that i was not on the otherside of that wrath. However, the part with November was really cute. I agree i got the feeling that he wants to marry iruka too.

chapter 01
OMG! Poor Iruka,I hope that he kicks ass even if he has been a teacher for so long. Did they have to do any tests I wonder? Dragon is a really cool name though. I hope he does good on the mission. Naruto is not even bi-curious??? *pout* oh well. I am hear for the iruka and kakashi anyways. Wonderful first chapter can't wait to read another one.

"As long as I have you, maybe not."

this says it all for this couple.

love the exchange between Philip and Iruka - delightful.
excellent chapter, thank you.

never worry how long it take to write quality and imagination!
drip away girl, drip away;D

“You're more mature and have more experience than most new recruits,” Kakashi continues. “He'll want to harvest you as soon as he can;" -
This is such a brilliant line.

very realistic gore factor(actually was expecting it to be worse) nice balance.
I love this Kakashi so much. He doesn't want Iruka to lose his humanity.
You made me tear up! (and his time over the years with Iruka has seamed help Kakashi find some of his again)

I finally read Hey Diddle Diddle's short you based the 'he wants' on
I am so glad you ran with that story, because you breathed life in what was a good dark one-shot
and made it incredible.

Wonderful chapter - thank you.

gah! did you post two in one shot?
or did I miss something?

no matter - you are one of the best writers out there and I don't gush like this often,
believe me!
your pace and prose are beautiful, stories original, putting just enough into your
characters to make them distinctly different from other writing, yet retain enough
of their original persona so they are recognizable.

this story keeps me wondering in a very good way - it is a story you want to know what will
happen next.
Iruka's anxiety of wanting to do right by ANBU, his disapointment in not being just Iruka with Kakashi,
and bringing in the extra "boys" for fun and tension and plot twists. kudos!

I'm like a puupy piddling on the floor when I see you update - that's how excited I get - heh!!!:D
thanks.