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July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
your German's not too bad:)
can you go "ya" instead of "yeah" I just tend to think American slang for yes.
also trying to boost your reviews;P
Have I told you I'm crazy for this story?
can you go "ya" instead of "yeah" I just tend to think American slang for yes.
also trying to boost your reviews;P
Have I told you I'm crazy for this story?
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July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yes...you are very silly o.o
you have beautiful conflict with Iruka as Anbu.
your evil, it must be killing him:)
but you show him as I see him in the manga, a great ninja.
he is striving to uphold his current position.
this chapter has the flavor of political intrigue.
look foward to what they find out on their recon.
very nice, excellent:)
thank you!
PS - I miss Kakashi right along with him:)
you have beautiful conflict with Iruka as Anbu.
your evil, it must be killing him:)
but you show him as I see him in the manga, a great ninja.
he is striving to uphold his current position.
this chapter has the flavor of political intrigue.
look foward to what they find out on their recon.
very nice, excellent:)
thank you!
PS - I miss Kakashi right along with him:)
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June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful characterizations, writing and a very fresh story. Soooooo good.
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yeah, another chapter!
bless you and yor twisted enjoyment:)
very excited to see this, your laying nice ground-work
for the story.
your writing is wonderful as always.
thank you!!!
bless you and yor twisted enjoyment:)
very excited to see this, your laying nice ground-work
for the story.
your writing is wonderful as always.
thank you!!!
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April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just wow. Fantastic opening chapter full of tension and emotion wonderfully expressed. Great story idea! Thanks!!!
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April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sai could be having the time of his life, for all Iruka can tell,
I love this line!
me likee the Garra too;p pretty, pretty Garra.
I like the natural progression of this story, never worry about detail!
and you made Iruka an adrenaline junkie...excellent!
shriveled black heart doing ok?
Happy Holiday and thanks:D
I love this line!
me likee the Garra too;p pretty, pretty Garra.
I like the natural progression of this story, never worry about detail!
and you made Iruka an adrenaline junkie...excellent!
shriveled black heart doing ok?
Happy Holiday and thanks:D
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March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
excellent, wonderful flow.
your progressing it at a smooth rate.
I look forward to the next.
than you:)
your progressing it at a smooth rate.
I look forward to the next.
than you:)
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March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
never be afraid to give information!
that's the only way to make a story worthy.
:)
so many fluff stories out there. don't get me wrong,
I love fluff, but it can get repetitive and boring so often.
thanks for something interesting.
that's the only way to make a story worthy.
:)
so many fluff stories out there. don't get me wrong,
I love fluff, but it can get repetitive and boring so often.
thanks for something interesting.
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February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!