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by Prism0467

person Anon
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Wipes drool away from mouth* Damn.....it's stories like this that make me proud to me a yaoi lover!!!!
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
BEAUTIFUL! Of all the things to focus on, I found Shikaku's fingering Hiashi'a hair the most significant. It's a simple little gesture like that that reveals the level of comfort and intimacy between these two. Not to mention the sensuality of it....


That gesture is absolutely beautiful!
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! It was so worth the wait! Every bit the amazing work that I have come to expect from you. I was glad for the insight in creating a backstory for Shikaku. It was really good. I love Gunter!! German boys rule!! And its so cute that Shikaku's so upbeat that he's singing!

Amazing work, sweetie! I am eagerly awaiting the next installment!
person Twiggies
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haaah, I love this fic! XD
Go Hiashi and Shikaku! They are so hot.
I liked Shikaku's back story. XD But I hope he won't be thinking about that Günther too much! :D
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh the way you write shikamaru and shikaku is so amazingly sexy ^_^ shikaku is one hot stud. and your layout of his cock is wow makes me wish i had him lmao^_^
person Anon
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lol, interesting reminisce Shikaku had...I admit it...it was hot >.
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've read! Gotta process and will review on deviantart!
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HOT! HOT! HOT! Oh my GOD that was hot. Amazingly, incredibly, beautifully, sexy-as-all-hells hot. And still so heart-achingly beautiful when you described Shikaku's feelings...*sigh* I wish I would be able to write like that. Anyway, I'm just as happy to be able to read it. Thank you for this chapter! Since I have to write a math test this evening I was very happy to see that you wrote another chapter...it really made my day and took the stress of learning away for a while ^_^
person Anon
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Drools* God damn *bows* Shikaku is a god!!! LOL when Shikaku told Hiashi it would be dangerous for him to do so now…lol I had the image of Shikaku exploding into Hiashi like a fire pump and Hiashi flying back and hitting the wall *cracks up* Shikaku shooting his load was like something from the exorcist lol!! Sry…maybe that was too much but it’s all right. A pleasure to be reading, update soon!
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was good. As good as the ShikaNe one. I can't wait to see what comes next in this one.