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November 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and I hope you come back to it, especially since the next chappie was going to be Naruto's point of view. I hope I'll be able to read the rest of this story in the future.
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow awesome... loved to see what happens when Madara spots Naruto
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July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I find this story interesting and refreshing. I also dig that Sai's a clone, wicked. So I know this is a Narusasu fic, but since Sai is another Sasuke (probably cooler, less of a jerk), I hope Naruto ends up with him.
I wish it could have been Itachi, but ur story works. Can't wait for more
I wish it could have been Itachi, but ur story works. Can't wait for more
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March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sai is a clone. Haven't read that before.
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
dude, that was just CREEPY!!! you're good! ;-) i didn't guess sai until the end, although you gave excellent clues. i'm just slow. LOL!
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was brilliant. Bringing Sai into the fold of Naruto admires......we all know
and must accept truthfully: Sai is from the Uchiha Clan. I loved the way Sasuke
found Naruto, discovering 0001, or Shino-kun within the water drain. I guess 0002 met his
end at the hand of Itachi. Looking forward to the next installment.
and must accept truthfully: Sai is from the Uchiha Clan. I loved the way Sasuke
found Naruto, discovering 0001, or Shino-kun within the water drain. I guess 0002 met his
end at the hand of Itachi. Looking forward to the next installment.
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow. wow. wow.
PURE GENIUS
PURE GENIUS
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a nice twist on Sai, I have to admit I wasn't sure who you were talking about but then I got it near the end and it made me smile hehe awesomeness
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sai!!! Sai Sai Sai is an Uchiha now! At first I was so bewildered- is this 001 an OC? But as their was talk of 001 having the same face as Sasuke I realized 'OMG! It must be Sai!'
What a totally awesome idea! It's a penis-obsessed Sasuke!!
I bet that girl, 003, was supposed to be Mikoto. 001 and 002 thought of her as a mother. It's so sad the three of them weren't able to be together for long...
I really love this story. The concept gets me excited- all the Uchihas going ga-ga over the Uzumakis. The first and second chapters were especially exciting. I loved seeing Madara go ga-ga over that Uzumaki lady, and Mikoto crushing on Kushina. I can't wait to find out what's going to happen to Naruto!
What a totally awesome idea! It's a penis-obsessed Sasuke!!
I bet that girl, 003, was supposed to be Mikoto. 001 and 002 thought of her as a mother. It's so sad the three of them weren't able to be together for long...
I really love this story. The concept gets me excited- all the Uchihas going ga-ga over the Uzumakis. The first and second chapters were especially exciting. I loved seeing Madara go ga-ga over that Uzumaki lady, and Mikoto crushing on Kushina. I can't wait to find out what's going to happen to Naruto!
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I love it. I love, love, love it. Sai as Sasuke's clone is sooooo cool. I have never ever seen it before. My only grievance is Tsunade would never let Danjo get away with what he did. And she certainly wouldn't authorize Sasuke's assasination. At least not that early in the game. Maybe after he left Orochimaru, joined hebi (don't know if it's spelled that way as I'm only on chapter 339), and almost killed Naruto, again.
I also agree that Kaka/Naru is weird. Although I must confess I've read some and they were really good stories, but I still found it weird. Besides that would not have worked in this story as it's the sharingan that makes the Uchihas so obsessed with Uzimakis. Oh, and thank you for explaining that. I look forward to the next chapter.
I also agree that Kaka/Naru is weird. Although I must confess I've read some and they were really good stories, but I still found it weird. Besides that would not have worked in this story as it's the sharingan that makes the Uchihas so obsessed with Uzimakis. Oh, and thank you for explaining that. I look forward to the next chapter.