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for Those Mistakes We Make

by ranmouri

person Tensai
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw, protective Kakashi's so cute))
person cinnamin911
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Im so excited for this fanfic! *squueee* please update soon, the uchiha dynamics are just WOW and
I cant wait to see what will happen later on! :3
person RasenganGirl
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story! Your doing great and I can't wait to see the next chapter!
person gigi
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! I just wanted to write that I have enjoyed reading your story! The emotions that each Uchiha have felt from Madara's father to Sasuke was conveyed in a smooth transition that actually made me tear and in some instances smirked when it was appropriate. I have nothing bad to critique, just that I actually teared up. How embarrassing! Hatake Kakashi, eh? Hmm.... Well, thank you for sharing your story and I look forward to the rest it!
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wait a minute, I thought Madara was the first Uchiha. The son of a Hyuuga and a demon. I'm very confused here.
Anyway, I like the story but you might want to explain what it is than make Uchiha go into rut when they see an Uzamaki. And that scene where Sasuke realizes Naruto is a boy is totally funny. I would pay to see that put into animation. Or even comic form.
person Gingitsune
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Another chapter :) I love how you sneak Itachi into this chapter as well. I love that part as to how Sasuke verified Naruto's gender! That totally cracked me up! :) I guess the chakra weights to Naruto’s legs and wrists were placed by Kakashi to help aid Sasuke? Hehe it would be better for him if Sasuke is not in the village as competition :)

Awesome chapter and I look forward to reading another chapter. I wonder if you would be doing one in Naruto's pov?
person Evil Genus
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just realized something, the obsession is only for Uchiha's with sharigan and kakashi has one. OMG! is kakashi obsessed with Uzumaki's also?
person kanaro
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So is this going to be only Madara/Naruto or is he going to be shared with all the sharingan users? 'Cause I do love Itachi/Naruto and would love to see that couple too (begs author with a pretty please and a cherry on top).

I love the story so far and can't wait to read more. I'm assuming that the pull is only one-sided since Kushina doesn't seem nearly as interested with the Uchihas as they are with her. Does that mean that Madara and Itachi will be activelly trying to sweep Naruto off his feet? I would love to them try; with how clueless they'd be at anything not relating to shinobis and with Naruto being so clueless about such things I think some funny situations would come about.

Update soon!
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I find your story a bit disturbing, no offense. The love the Uchiha's feel for Kushina is borderline obsession, Mikoto and especially Itachi's the most psychotic. I'm surprised that Kushina tolerated the almost suffocating love with such ease, she's almost like a saint. I don't know how nice I would be to a child that keeps breaking and entering into my house without my permission. I am almost afraid for Naruto, now that Itachi has found him again. I wonder if the cover up surrounding Naruto's death is a direct result of the "love" the Uchiha's had for Kushina and consequently Naruto. I think this is very well written, I can feel what the Uchiha's feel very clearly and that is probably why I am so uncomfortable with this story. I don't think I will be back to find out what happens next and don't take this as a criticism, it's a great story, it's just not my cup of tea.
person Gingitsune
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sharingan usersXNaruto? (O_o) So is Kakashi in the mix? :) Love this story and the plot is definitely one that I have never seen before! Maybe Itachi killed off the clan that so that he can married Naruto? :) Awesomeness~ Can't wait to read more.