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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i liked this chapter. even though itachi turned out o be a good guy he was devious apparently itachi was conniving since birth. keep up the good work and can't for the next chapter.
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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a well thought out and carefully planned plot...thank you for all your hard work to make this so wonderful to read. I am looking forward the the next upate. I like the idea of blood bound desire to love Naruto.
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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow this is great stuff cant wait for more
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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I want more. I love Itachi's liveliness and distinctly different personality. Anyway until next time.
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February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing. I'm excited to see where this leads (please let it be sex! lol)
I liked how you had just the right amount of detail and the paceing was well done. Great Job!
-T. Amaterasu
I liked how you had just the right amount of detail and the paceing was well done. Great Job!
-T. Amaterasu
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February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh shit! O_O
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February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Oh wow. I've never come across this premise before in any Naruto fanfic. God! I can't wait to see where you take this. I noticed you said it would be SasuNaru...any hints of MadaNaru? Just asking. --grin--
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really like how this story is so far. in actuality i was pumped up at first when saw i say to be continued then it turned out o be the beginning of he chapter again. my only question is because naruto is a descendant of the wave and a nakiaze is madara still going to have it out for him or did it die with minato. will this effect how sasuke''s mother brother and father in fact the whole clan are going to act towards naruto. i can't wait to see the next chapter.
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's a great story idea and I love the idea of binding the blood line limits like that. I can't wait for more. Just be careful when entering the story. It repeated twice.
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
sounds very interesting. one thing though the chapter was posted twice on one page. probably a systems error but i thought you might want to know and fix it