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for My ANBU Hime's

by BastardOmega

schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
go Naru
person Takai153
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is one hell of a fic! I think Naruto should use the kage bunshin to gangbang them! Maybe one of the girls should get a strap-n or a double ended dildo during group sex. Also looking forward to Kyuubi and Ayame. Seems like they're definately going to get a turn.

Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can!
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story, hope there will be more
person random
schedule September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
a great storry, please keep up the good work.
schedule September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice twist on the whole half demon angle in this story I hope that you update again soon.
schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story, cant wait to see more.
person sh8ad8ow
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story realy liked it hope you maintain the harem small (keep it as is and maybe include Ayame and/or Kyuuki and no one else) coz that way you can make a decent plot that isnt only about going from sex scene to sex scene and nothing else, theres enough of that already and honestly it get old realy fast, and also for the sake of character development and the relationship between them, please think about it coz this story has potential and I dont want to see it degraded to sex,sex and sex without an actual plot and story to keep the reader interested in it.
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome will there be other girls besides anko, hana and yugao
person Anon
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's the best! I love "my anbu hime's" Keep up the good work!!!
person highblade
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story, no obvious mistakes in spelling or grammar, good job of having the story lead from one lemon to the next. the question is where will you take it and how will you introduce future characters. are you planning to add any characters from naruto's age group or have naruto use a solid henge to turn into a girl? I look forward to your next chapter, this has the makings of a great fic.