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September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was so amazing, I can't help but be enthralled by your sheer awesomeness...
...although, there's a little demon in my head, insisting that Sakura and Naruto are sitting outside the tent, probably with wide eyes and nosebleeds.
...although, there's a little demon in my head, insisting that Sakura and Naruto are sitting outside the tent, probably with wide eyes and nosebleeds.
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August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that sent shivers down my back, now can't ever look at a tent the same.
But I love the fic, and Sasuke biting the mask was erotic.
Can't wait to read more of your works [this was so AWESOME!!!]
But I love the fic, and Sasuke biting the mask was erotic.
Can't wait to read more of your works [this was so AWESOME!!!]
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August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SO FUCKING HOOOOOOOT
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February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I DID NOT KNOW YOU HAD POSTED THIS! :o I guess I got lazy, b/c you had reminded me over on y! the last time or two, and I didn't think to check >_<
But omg, yes. I LOVE THIS THING. A ha ha, I love the way Kakashi gets under his skin at the beginning, and their little back and forth ^__^ Sasuke just can't keep up with his sensei, and it's wonderful :D And the upside-down book made me laugh XD
And ohhhh man, the smut, it seems like you're getting better and better! And I don't want that to sound insulting, b/c you were already good. But now, BETTER! :D Uhhhhhhhhhhh, mannnn. And it's not just because you made Sasuke premature, either! (Though that... that was... *dies* I reread that bit quite a few times ^^) This one felt so immediate, so there-in-the-moment, and it was just... deliciousssss. ♥
Heee, and I love the way Kakashi's like, You gonna try out for chuunin? And I think you're starting to be influenced by those of us who like TEH FLUFF, because yes, that was SO SWEET. And at the end, when Sasuke says that about Kakashi watching him. ♥
And NO WAY THAT SUCKS about your computer D: That's kind of what happened to me, though luckily I had a few things saved elsewhere, anyway, or i was able to pull them up from attachments in emails where i had emailed them to people. But I lost quite a bit of stuff. BUT NOOOOOO!!!! those stories you lost, I love them! I hope you will find the inspiration to work on them again!
But omg, yes. I LOVE THIS THING. A ha ha, I love the way Kakashi gets under his skin at the beginning, and their little back and forth ^__^ Sasuke just can't keep up with his sensei, and it's wonderful :D And the upside-down book made me laugh XD
And ohhhh man, the smut, it seems like you're getting better and better! And I don't want that to sound insulting, b/c you were already good. But now, BETTER! :D Uhhhhhhhhhhh, mannnn. And it's not just because you made Sasuke premature, either! (Though that... that was... *dies* I reread that bit quite a few times ^^) This one felt so immediate, so there-in-the-moment, and it was just... deliciousssss. ♥
Heee, and I love the way Kakashi's like, You gonna try out for chuunin? And I think you're starting to be influenced by those of us who like TEH FLUFF, because yes, that was SO SWEET. And at the end, when Sasuke says that about Kakashi watching him. ♥
And NO WAY THAT SUCKS about your computer D: That's kind of what happened to me, though luckily I had a few things saved elsewhere, anyway, or i was able to pull them up from attachments in emails where i had emailed them to people. But I lost quite a bit of stuff. BUT NOOOOOO!!!! those stories you lost, I love them! I hope you will find the inspiration to work on them again!
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February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was absolutely amazing. I was so taken by your characterization, your use of language.
But what was most powerful about it was the undertones of emotion laced throughout. How Kakashi wonders why he wears a mask when he can just wear Sasuke's lips -- how Sasuke feels first fear, then reassurance, when Kakashi says his name. Then, of course -- the most heartrending moment -- when Kakashi simply says, "Sasuke... missed you."
That, and all the sex between it was so fucking GOOD. *O*
And the sex itself. Oh my god, HOT! You did an amaaaaaaaazing job by taking away their sense of sight so they can only rely on touch, smell, taste. Then Sasuke coming in his pants - askljfaslkjfljksadf. GAH. Amazing.
You really should post this on LJ!!! :D Great job. <3
But what was most powerful about it was the undertones of emotion laced throughout. How Kakashi wonders why he wears a mask when he can just wear Sasuke's lips -- how Sasuke feels first fear, then reassurance, when Kakashi says his name. Then, of course -- the most heartrending moment -- when Kakashi simply says, "Sasuke... missed you."
That, and all the sex between it was so fucking GOOD. *O*
And the sex itself. Oh my god, HOT! You did an amaaaaaaaazing job by taking away their sense of sight so they can only rely on touch, smell, taste. Then Sasuke coming in his pants - askljfaslkjfljksadf. GAH. Amazing.
You really should post this on LJ!!! :D Great job. <3
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February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
For the record, you should be on LJ! There is a ton of KakaSasu stuff out there and it's just so much more fun! This is me tempting you to come to the dark side. I mean, the KakaSasu side. Yes, come. COME. JOIN. XD;;
Anyway, oh my god, thank you so much for that lovely review. XD Now I feel like I need to do you better justice but it's 7:30am here and I haven't slept! So this is me spamming you, instead of reviewing you instead. You are awesome. And I just discovered a wealth of fic that you've written and I will have to read it all now. Well, not now. But soon. ♥
Anyway, oh my god, thank you so much for that lovely review. XD Now I feel like I need to do you better justice but it's 7:30am here and I haven't slept! So this is me spamming you, instead of reviewing you instead. You are awesome. And I just discovered a wealth of fic that you've written and I will have to read it all now. Well, not now. But soon. ♥
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February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay for more spam!
Actually, I don't use y!gal except to look at imlikat's (yaoiismyantidrug)'s artwork. That's it. XD;;; I dont even really know how to use it, so I stick to LJ. You should get LJ. I'm seriouuuuuuuus. *TEMPTS* ... ;D
(Though you could just visit my LJ if you ever wanted to read stuff too. xD)
If you ever would like to chat privately or something I'm "in subtext" on AIM and in.subtext at gmail dot com. :D
Actually, I don't use y!gal except to look at imlikat's (yaoiismyantidrug)'s artwork. That's it. XD;;; I dont even really know how to use it, so I stick to LJ. You should get LJ. I'm seriouuuuuuuus. *TEMPTS* ... ;D
(Though you could just visit my LJ if you ever wanted to read stuff too. xD)
If you ever would like to chat privately or something I'm "in subtext" on AIM and in.subtext at gmail dot com. :D
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February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LJ is definitely not confusing! And if you are confused I can help you with it! ^___^ Yessss please joinnn :D
You're nice too. ^_^ <3
You're nice too. ^_^ <3