rate_review Reviews

This was eerily beautiful and deep. I couldn't stop reading even when the light from my window died down. I didn't even bother to get up to turn on the light. It was like a gruesome car crash you can't look away from as I read about Sakura believing in vain that Sasuke loved her and was waiting for her in her bedroom.

I love the story because it's so real. I would have bulked like you if I read a story where someone was so easily forgiven for such an act as rape. It's not right and it shouldn't be forgiven. The fact that Sakura's father had the balls to try and pressure not only his daughter but Sasuke to marry each other made me want to hurt maime him.

I'm sort of glad that there were people around Sakura in her time of need but she seriously didn't deserve Naruto's forgiveness. I don't hate Sakura and I never really try to bash her if possible but even I have noticed that sometimes in the graphic novel her obssession with Sasuke is beyond unhealthy. So it was very interesting reading a story in which we find her going over the deep in. It was very angst ridden but again a beautiful story that proves that there doesn't always have to be a happy ending for it to be a good read. ^^

I just want to say I think your story is brilliant and heartbreaking. Too often female-on-male rape is treated like a joke and it's refreshing to see someone take it seriously.

I was really pleased with this story, its not often that i read fanfiction so well written and obviusly thought out. My only complaint is that i don't think they would exacute someone so obviously mentally disturbed. I don't know about you but having her wedding dress picked out and being registered at a store for a romance that was all in her head is pretty psycho. Another issue i wished you had clarified is that the reader never see's Sakura's view on Naruto and Sasuke's relaitionship. Does she simply not aknoledge it or is her psycosis keeping her from realizing it? It would have been interesting if she had gotten pregnant but it was still an awsome story and fun to read.

I admit I don't know where your from but here in Australia, rape certainly isn't punishable by death. I heard of a case a few years ago where a man had raped 9 children and got away with 8 1/2 years in prison. Its sickening how people think that these monsters can be rehabilitated. That man should certainly have been punished the same way as Sakura! An amazing story, you really drove your beliefs home and I really admire that, and I agree with them. Congrats on a fantastic story.

You handled this remarkably well. I really was very pleased with the read and how it flowed. You did a great job!

Wow. I almost forgot about this story. I reread it a got all excited all over again. Are you planning on continuing this? I hope so. I can't wait to read what is going to happen next. I definitly can see Sasuke in therapy and Sakura in a padded room. Or dead. Naruto's going to snap her pink head off for what she has done. Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter sometime in the near future.

OOOOOOOOOH! I like this story and the plot is amazingly deep. I was so into it that I was pissed off that that was the end of it! *cries*

Thank you for giving this subject the weight it deserves.

i might not be a great fan of sakura's however the damaged caused by her parents are a factor - she to me was brainwashed like root as a child that she should bee sasuke's wife - very well written - i hope to read more soon

Oh my g*d.
I grope for words as I type this review. That was the first and last rape story I will ever read. You touched on everything--females rape males, when males are sexually molested they are often ridiculed, sex crimes against males are rarely reported...and you gave Sakura the death penalty without the permission to appeal, and two months to live. Thank you so much. The characterization was concise and accurate. The story is too believable. I praise your skill as a writer and invite you to write more stories. I will read and enthusiastically review them.