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whoa, that was just intense! as a adult survivor of child molestation, i could relate to your portrayal of the uchihia yet feel sorry for sakura.

well done!

Thank you! Even though I am slightly distrubed by the amount of Rape Fanfics that are coming out, what really distrubes me the most is that for some reason everyone is forgiven or even in some the victim winds up with his/her rapist. It is nice to see something in which the person is not forgiven, and speaks about how the victims are more then just the one raped, and how it can destroy many lives. I especially like show you showed someone realizing that the people in power screwed up in regards to kids. To often children complain and rather then look into it they brush it off or think it is cute. It is nice to see a fic in which someone is finally doing what is right.

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Anyhow
- Rape is a serious issue
- A lot of people writing about a person being raped also writes about the victim forgiving his/her rapist which is sick and disgusting and unrealistic and those people should just die in a fire after being beheaded and... stuff... you know
- Your fic is both nice and needed to show people that it isnt ok to rape someone. Yes, I will confess that I dont mind reading about rape fics, but if I do I want them to be serious and not romanticed to the degree that its not even funny.

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This is good so far i want 2 read more

VERY INTERESTING CAN I HAVE MORE NOW PLEASE

To tell the truth, when I read the summary of this fic, I thought, 'Crap, another rape fic, when will this stupidity end?' As someone who had worked with abused children, I find it extremely distrubing that in a fandom such as Naruto, rape fics has started to pop out everywhere.

But upon finishing in reading your story, I will have to applaud you. This story is far beyond what I thought it would be and that is a surprise in itself. The fact that Sasuke was abused in his youth, and the reasons for it, are quite believable though I might have to disagree at some points (i.e. if Itachi even got wind of Sasuke being abused, he would have killed them with no mercy and no chance of him taking the flack for it).

Naruto as Sasuke's only hope for normalcy is really well done, and the added angst of them having their first child (thank Christ you didn't make this into an Mpreg) in the midst of such a tragedy...ahh, their relationship will never be normal, will it? I have to agree with you, though, on how the Sandaime took things. I wondered many times why no one bothered with Naruto when he was younger in canon, and if the Sandaime was always there for him, why couldn't he have made sure that Naruto weren't treated in such a dismal way? Sure, maybe it's because he's busy being Hokage as well, but there has got to be some way for Naruto not to have grown so alone, you know?

However, the only problem I would have with this story is some shifts in grammar tense, and a few typos. But other than that, I have nothing else to say.

Keep up the good work, and I wait patiently for the next chapter.

Wonderful piece! I am so glad to see that there are some people who actually take this subject matter seriously. I've been finding the growing popularity of rape as a plot devise to be more than a little disturbing. It's everywhere, and what's worse is that it's romanticized all to hell! Far too many authors tend to brush off the terrible ramifications, treating this like it's no big deal, like rape is something minor and forgivable. I think you've got an excellent bit of social commentary here. And it really is gratifying in a way to know that you were motivated enough to put in the time and effort to get your message out.
Thank you for sharing this with us.

Nice story, a very good and realistic take on the rape!fic 'genre' that perpetuates most fandoms, even ones such as Naruto.

You seem to have some problems though, especially with tenses and homophones. If you like, I could beta for you. My email is AnselaJonla(AT)gmail(DOT)com.

I'm really glad you treated this with such seriousness. Too often the effect of rape is dealt with lightly, witout thought for the effect.

Great, though heart wrenching story. I like Sakura, shipuuden Sakura especially - but if you let your mind play it out, allow her to give into her obsession... the thought goes places dark and disturbing.