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for The Running Free

by yolotengo

schedule March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My mom was given a central line after her last surgery. It helped because the veins in her arms were getting abused by all the needle sticks. And because she was taking chemo, her arms were just black and blue from the bruising due to the needles. Anyway, on to the story. This is for chapter 13. God, I feel so sorry for all of them. Naruto staying nauseated all the time. Sasuke for having to go through chemo and worrying about Naruto on top of it. And Itachi's really in a jam because he's got to be strong for his little brother and Naruto. I can't imagine Madara as a doctor. But I could see how he wouldn't get along with Itachi. I can't wait to see how Sasuke's parents are going to deal with their youngest son having cancer and fixing to be a father simultaneously. Update soon, please. Oh, and keep up the awesome work.
person Jan
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gods, poor Sasuke, not to mention all three of them, it seems as though everything around them is coming down and quickly.

I can't wait for chapter 14 soon ^_^

Jan
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am eating this story alive!!! This story has so much angst, I think i have gotten an ulcer! Love the research you did on cancer, it's treatments, and their side effects. Great story!
schedule March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The suspense of Sasuke's parnets finding out is killing me... I can't wait to read more. And thank you for not killing Sasuke. :)
person Kirai
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, great chapters, Sasuke having cancer was a new idea, but it could work out well. Sakura being Sasuke's doctor was mad funny though. If you want a challenge bring in Sasuke and Itachi's parents. That the father let his sons do as they pleased and live out life for themselves. But taking reputation seriously and due to their high class have gay children would not be permitted. And with Naruto being pregnant that causes all sorts of issues. While Itachi has bad eyes and Sasuke is sick that leaves a scared and pregnant Naruto to cope and fend for himself between the inner-clan battles. Don't know just a thought? It just came to mind and could extend the story to a never-ending-story. tehe ^-^
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, if Sasuke were going to get pregnant by a guy (for me anyway) the father would have to be Naruto. I'm guessing Sasuke has cancer. My mom had the same kind of symptoms before she was diagnosed with colon cancer. But then you may have something else in mind. On to chapter 12.
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So I was right about Sasuke having cancer. That sucks. I don't want Sasuke to die. Naruto's going to have his baby and he needs to be there so he can be a daddy. My mom actually when she was going through chemotherapy commuted back and forth to an out-of-state hospital every two weeks for a year. This was toward the end of her life. She was in late stage when she was diagnosed. Looking forward to the next chapter and I hope you update soon.
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
[Chapter 10] I hope Sasuke is okay. I'm so worried now. I'm glad Iruka didn't go ballistic when he found out Naruto was pregnant. On to chapter 11.
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
God poor Sasuke. All i can say is thank god you didn't make him have pancreatic cancer. That is one of the hardest to treat. Please for the love of god don't kill Sasuke. Great chapter, what is next for the trio? Keep up the good work.
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmm i wonder if there will be character death. i hope not.