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for The Running Free

by yolotengo

schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmmm ok he's not pregnant. i'm so excited to find out what it is although i think i have an idea ^_^ but i hope it's not fatal
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I knew something crazy would go down at Gaara's party. I wonder what Itachi is going to say when he finds out Sasuke and Naruto did more than just get drunk at the party. Hmm?
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was sure Iruka was going to throw a fit when he found out about Naruto wanting to go to Gaara's party. Well, at least Itachi, Sasuke, and Naruto finally got to do the deed without any interruptions. I'm still looking forward to finding out what happens at Gaara's party.
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A party at Gaara's. I wonder what kind of weird stuff goes on there. Hmm? Can't wait to find out. Damn it, Kiba, why'd you have to interrupt the Naruto/Sasuke/Itachi fun? Argh!
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love fluffy chapters like this. The three of them are so sweet together. I still envy Naruto, getting to sleep between Itachi and Sasuke like that. On to chapter 5.
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I envy Naruto. Not only is he in a threesome with Itachi and Sasuke, he gets to sleep beside them at night, too. *Heavy sigh!* :) Anyway, loved the Sasuke/Itachi action this chapter. And I did not know that about birth control pills but then they do trick the body into thinking it's pregnant so that would explain Naruto's weight obsession. On to chapter 4.
person Jan
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I wonder how Itachi is going to react... will he kill Sasuke first or congratulate him first?

Please update chapter 10 soon ^_^

Jan
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I did not know that about FEVR. I have really bad eye sight myself but nothing as serious as that. I'm glad you were able to have the problem corrected. Anyway, about the chapter. Yeah, I can tell you were getting the plot organized since not much really went on but it's always good to establish a foundation as to the characters' relationships and how they interact with one another before the main action begins. Now on to chapter 3.
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the first chapter. This story has all my favorite pairings and then some with the threesome between Sasuke, Itachi, and Naruto. It might take me a while to read the other chapters (I'm on a tight schedule with work and whatnot) but I'll definitely read the rest. Hopefully, one chapter every day until the end. I wonder what's going to happen at Itachi's apartment. Hmm? *evil laughs.* Until chapter 2.
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice, Thanks for the up date. I always look forward to this story. Its very well written and thats a big thing with me.