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for The Running Free

by yolotengo

person Anon
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story more and more. please hurry and post another chapt
person Kirai
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, have had a very busy weekend and stressful classes but I got it done,yay. Buch of new sexy red-hot chapters with laughs and tears along the way. I love this story not only because it is so true to the characters. But also they are OOC but yet seem not to be. And even if they are it is so probable that it makes up for the OOCness. I am wondering what the hell Itachi will do to Sasuke when he finds out that his two lovers had a bit more fun at Gaara's party then just drinking? LOL Great job can't wait for more!
person LadyWolf
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well the shit has surely hit the fan!!

Post soon!!
person Jan
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, will Naruto get pregnant from Sasuke tonight or will it be another day that our beloved blond gets pregnant?

Please update chapter 8 soon ^_^

Jan

PS: Is there anyway that you could email me a notice when you next update?
naiomi2nailyn@yahoo.com
person qwerty
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I sense a pregnant Naruto in the future! teehee!
Keep going!
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Naruto gonna get Prego..."it's in there", or a bun in the oven.
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice i enjoyed that chapter. Keep up the good work and don't worry about reviewing super fast as long as you don't drop the story. School comes first.
~Daydreamer
person Ciel-Sama
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your story (because I'm a whore for a good plot & nice writing/grammer)! I just started reading it but I can tell I'm gonna have all the chapters blown through by tommorow and be on my knees asking for more! Can you do me a favor and read & review mine? I need someone who's good at writing to tell me what they think...I'm new as a member (though I've been reading stories here for over a year)and "What Happens Next?" is my first story EVERRRRRR! So help would be much apprieciated ;)
person a kitsunes light
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I can't wait to know what's gonna happen next!!! Im soooc curius! Also I hope everything goes well with tachi's surgery!
Plesae update soon!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this, please hurry up and post a new chapt