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for The Running Free

by yolotengo

schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Keep updating and i will keep reading. I can't get enough of this trio. Loved the lemon. =D.
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I'm looking forward to the next installment ^_^
person LadyWolf
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must say I have come to love these three together as much as I love Naru/Sas/Gaara...**so freakin' hot!!!***

I really like reading this...now if a lemon is to be next then the question arises...??? Did our little blonde angel take his pill??

post soon!@!!
person Kirai
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey Sasuke sounds exactly like me... The exact same, lol I loose my eyesight after a while from readding too long. I also have the Type to speech program and the zoom screen. The best book on tape was the Mice And Men, Told by the guy who played as Spike from Buffy the vampire slayer. Twelve is around my limit as well, afew months ago it was ten but I was not wearing my glasses and that did me in. I am past the point of being able to see fine details clearly without my glasses. I love to do puzzles but am not able to see the fine lines and cut of the peices to know if they fit together right without the stupid glasses. I will post more reviews after reading more just was shocked at how Sasuke came out to be so much like me, it was kinda cool...really cool ^_^
person Kirai
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL That was great I feel for them I really do, it must suck bad 'to be in heaven one moment, just to be yanked down to hell by a fucking doorbell.' That was sweet though the Kiba part had me cracking up, Kiba does seem to always come at the worst of times. What a way to wake up, I wish there was a Naruto to make-out with me to wake me up. And the two dick thing with Naruto is awesome, I have only ever heard of it from one other fic; I am so excited for it. And I agree with Itachi, if I had two fucking hot sex-gods that were displayed beautifully infront of me getting it on, I would be content with watching too. tehe ^-^
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely nothing wrong with sappy. I love sappy and I tend to put alot of sappiness in my stories. Great update and I am glad to hear you are a fast updater. That used to be me until i started writing three stories at once. I am also loving how you are portraying Itachi. I always saw him as the type that would be tender and loving if his family hadn't fucked him up. Can't wait for the next update.

~Daydreamer
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
if i didnt know you updated fast i would be pissed at them being interupted. Nice chapter i'm looking forward to the next.
~Daydreamer
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
sorry that your not getting that many reviews...but it tends to happen like that some times.....i really like your story so far and would love to see you continue it....thanxz for sharing
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is the first time i have had a chance to sit down and read in a few days. Normally i dont read threesomes but sasuke/itachi/naruto is my one exception. I think its cuz i love naru/sasu and i love itachi so throw the three together and bam you got me hooked. You have done a awesome job with the story so far. I love you for actually having good grammar, so many times i stop a story that had alot of potential because the grammar was horrible. So thank you for that. I hope that you keep up with this story. I will definately be keeping an eye out for it. Happy Writing.
~Daydreamer
person vulgarai
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ItaSasuNaru is my OT3. <3 ^ ^ I really like this story. The plot is unique and cool. And I think it's so cute the way that Naruto's all like 'I'm fat D:'. Hahaa. You update so much! I love it! :D


Keep the goodness coming, please!