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for True Directions

by anlaaria

person Moondork
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This has a cliche and overused plot BUT I LOVE it! You took most of the characters on a different turn then any other writers have for this plot. I will wait like a good little fan girl to see what comes next. Just one itty little favor though? Please don't make Kushina to become a true anatgonist in the story. I like the idea of her being the disgusted Mom you have so far, but I like the idea of her coming around because she DOES love her son. She may never ACCEPT that part of him but she will still love him.
person Ed
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I gotta watch the movie this fic is based off of now. Also I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens! Keep up the good writing!
person Anon
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So I just started reading this little fiction that was on the Naruto update page, and to my surprise, it is effing amazing! I love But I'm A Cheerleader, but I think that your version is quite possibly the most amazing rewrite ever imagined! I love the placing of the characters, and how you manage to keep them in character. I am completely going to stay glued to the updates to see when you post a new chapter! I simply can't wait to keep reading!!!
person Pics Pixie
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh so luvs the fact that theres some total sasu/naru romance going on now :P really hope u update soon cause i'm constanting looking in to see if u do :P keep up the amazing work
person Sean Wright
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It hurts to read this story. I am not lesbian so I never had to experience such confusion, hurt, and shame for being myself or wanting to be happy. With each chapter I think of how my aunt had to cope with the realization that she was not the same as her sisters or female cousins. I wonder how did my grandparents or my father dealt with the fact that their daughter/sister was a homosexual. I wonder about the stigmas and the prejudice that she and her lovers have to deal and currently face living in South and in heavily Conservative areas. I apologize for sharing this with you, but I wanted to share how your story makes me feel or rather what I think about after reading each chapter. So thank you for writing this story.

Okay, now that I shared that, I feel ready to review.

Naruto is fasinating, I enjoy reading his self discovery, but it is Sasuke who my complete attention. I feel so bad for him, he's really lost everything and his life has just tail-spun into hell. He is trying handle as best as he can, but dang its not his fault, he is just being true to himself. Oh, this last chapter was just brutal for him. He was disowned and his father didn't have the balls to come say it to his face. Oh, poor Sasuke! Man, that was just cold-blooded. At least he has found or is in the process of finding love. I hope that he and Naruto can make it together. It would be fantasic if Naruto's father just accept his son for who he is and let him come home. It would just blow me out of the water if the same could happen for Sasuke.
I am a sucker for a happy ending (although I will never write one). I hope that the boys would wind-up with a good ending.

Again, thank you for writing this story, it is deeply moving and I am enjoying it very much.

Sean
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Intense! Naruto's converstions with his father brought out so many emotions of regret.

And his moment with Sasuke? FINALLY! They're both little emotional wrecks but that's why we love them. This chapter was such a turning point. I loved every minute of it.

Please please update soon ^^
person hisoka
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
damn id hate my entire family if something like this happened to me,i wouldnt be surprised if he didnt want to see any of them again.and the world keeps turning
person inuspike
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow, poor Naruto! I nearly started to cry when he was having his breakdown. I'm in love with this story right now, you're an amazing writer! I'm on the edge of my seat with anticipation for your next chapter. ^^
person Kim
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow I really like the story and I can't wait to read more. :D
person bitchesknowbest
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Totally wicked story man!!!!