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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Something tells me to be afraid for poor Iruka.
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April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is awsome. Please keep up the graet work you do.
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April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this and to A Life For a Life (I'm up to 82 on mm .org), do you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know? the email is PotionsPet@hotmail.com
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April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think Kyuubi should somehow work with Anko's curse seal to make her even sexier, maybe a half snake woman that can coil up around her prey to give him a full body hug?
Nice game, but what will happen with Sakura? Maybe become Naruto and Hinata's little pet?
Nice game, but what will happen with Sakura? Maybe become Naruto and Hinata's little pet?
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm impressed.
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know, you should do something with...
A. Shika and his shadows with Ino or Temari.
B. Chouji/Ino or Ayame, Chouji is a connesieur of tastes, and Ino/Ayame is a new flavor to try.
C. Lee showing Sakura why one should never underestimate the flames of youth, and the benefits of Gai's training in other physically exerting activities.
D. Anko learning a special lesson from Iruka-sensei.
E. Sai showing a girl just how erotic running a paintbrush across the skin, or a trio of sensitive buds can be. He can show a woman how he can paint her canvas into ecstasy.
F. Kakashi showing Shizune what his study of Icha Icha has wrought.
G. If he's still alive in this story, Jiraiya showing Tsunade that regardless of his perversion, he's still a master of the female form, and that her form is his greatest treasure, and one he'd never disgrace by featuring in his novels.
H. Kyuubi gaining a measure of freedom, or possessing a Kage Bunshin, and showing Hana or Tsume what real animal magnitism is.
I. Yamato showing Yuugao how to love again, and how to really handle a piece of wood.
J. Oh yeah, do some more with the Kage Bunshin for Hinata. You know, double the pleasure, double the fun.
Haven't figured anything out for Gaara(Matsuri) or Shino yet, but I'm working on it.
A. Shika and his shadows with Ino or Temari.
B. Chouji/Ino or Ayame, Chouji is a connesieur of tastes, and Ino/Ayame is a new flavor to try.
C. Lee showing Sakura why one should never underestimate the flames of youth, and the benefits of Gai's training in other physically exerting activities.
D. Anko learning a special lesson from Iruka-sensei.
E. Sai showing a girl just how erotic running a paintbrush across the skin, or a trio of sensitive buds can be. He can show a woman how he can paint her canvas into ecstasy.
F. Kakashi showing Shizune what his study of Icha Icha has wrought.
G. If he's still alive in this story, Jiraiya showing Tsunade that regardless of his perversion, he's still a master of the female form, and that her form is his greatest treasure, and one he'd never disgrace by featuring in his novels.
H. Kyuubi gaining a measure of freedom, or possessing a Kage Bunshin, and showing Hana or Tsume what real animal magnitism is.
I. Yamato showing Yuugao how to love again, and how to really handle a piece of wood.
J. Oh yeah, do some more with the Kage Bunshin for Hinata. You know, double the pleasure, double the fun.
Haven't figured anything out for Gaara(Matsuri) or Shino yet, but I'm working on it.
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know, you should do something with...
A. Shika and his shadows with Temari.
B. Chouji/Ino or Ayame, Chouji is a connesieur of tastes, and Ino/Ayame is a new flavor to try.
C. Sai showing a girl (possibly Ino) just how erotic running a paintbrush across the skin, or a trio of sensitive buds can be. He can show a woman how he can paint her canvas into ecstasy. Trust me, if done correctly, this is very effective.
Still haven't figured anything out for Gaara(Matsuri) or Shino yet, but I'm working on it.
A. Shika and his shadows with Temari.
B. Chouji/Ino or Ayame, Chouji is a connesieur of tastes, and Ino/Ayame is a new flavor to try.
C. Sai showing a girl (possibly Ino) just how erotic running a paintbrush across the skin, or a trio of sensitive buds can be. He can show a woman how he can paint her canvas into ecstasy. Trust me, if done correctly, this is very effective.
Still haven't figured anything out for Gaara(Matsuri) or Shino yet, but I'm working on it.
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
See, this is why I love Temari.
You know, you should do something with...
A. Shika and his shadows with Temari.
B. Chouji/Ayame, Chouji is a connesieur of tastes, and Ayame flavored ramen is a new flavor to try.
C. Sai showing a girl (possibly Ino) just how erotic running a paintbrush across the skin, or a trio of sensitive buds can be. He can show a woman how he can paint her canvas into ecstasy. Trust me, if done correctly, this is very effective.
D. Have Sasuke do the Tsukiyomi on Karin. Only instead of torturing her with pain, he can use it for pleasure. Three days of pleasure in a second, wowzer.
Still haven't figured anything out for Gaara(Matsuri) or Shino yet, but I'm working on it.
You know, you should do something with...
A. Shika and his shadows with Temari.
B. Chouji/Ayame, Chouji is a connesieur of tastes, and Ayame flavored ramen is a new flavor to try.
C. Sai showing a girl (possibly Ino) just how erotic running a paintbrush across the skin, or a trio of sensitive buds can be. He can show a woman how he can paint her canvas into ecstasy. Trust me, if done correctly, this is very effective.
D. Have Sasuke do the Tsukiyomi on Karin. Only instead of torturing her with pain, he can use it for pleasure. Three days of pleasure in a second, wowzer.
Still haven't figured anything out for Gaara(Matsuri) or Shino yet, but I'm working on it.
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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God. Amazing. Truly amazing. I believe Jiraiya-sama himself would applaud your writing. Ne'er before have I read a story that works Kyuubi as a slight comic-relief, while also urging the other characters along with their on plots. Also, it's a far more elegant smut novel than much of what you find on AFF.
Very well done.
Very well done.
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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I'll stop asking. But I think it would be better to do a separate story for the other pairings since ramen implies Naruto and Hinata. Shoose a different dish for each couple to keep it fun!