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for Ramen Delights

by AlysiaStorms

person Anon
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SSSSSSOOOOOOO GGGOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDD, SSSSOOOOOOOOO GGGGGRRRRRRREEEEEEEEAAAAAAATTTTTTT! I like it. I love it. I want more of it!
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How about Naruto uses his Sexy no Jutsu to experience the female side of things?
person 00Penguin
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice little cliff hanger. So far updating quickly. It could have been delivered a little less bluntly but still not bad.
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If I were Hinata I would be so pissed. >:)
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dang, I wanted more. How about Naruto uses Sexy no Jutsu to double Hinata's pleasure next time?
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woah... very nice. But I suggest next time Hinata poor the ramen on herself and let Naruto lick her clean!
person NarutosBrat
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, this is getting good. Can't wait to see where it goes.
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omg, I love it. Seriously, damn good story! Much love, keep up the shmexy work!!!
person seacatsd
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice! This is very, very, very well written. I love the style, you don't get many stories here with this much class.
person PnKnG
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GOD! This is god damn hot. update soon please!!!