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December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NICE!!! i dig the whole plot and i read that prequil and it was sweet to hehehe i didn't coment because adultfanfiction was doing something idk what but i just couldn't and then i was bussy all day but i really like this its sweet but sad.... i can't belive itachi lost his eye sight!!!!!
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I decided to review here as well since I thought you hadn't gotten enough reviews for a wonderful fic such as this.
And it deserve a lot more of those because it is awesome, and so are you!
I love you way of writing, it's very descriptive and humorous, and that's a good combination. I read with excitement and cravings for more while occasionally chuckling at the funny puns and comments you've place in it.
And writing a realistic Naruto fanfic with the ItaNaru-pairing nowadays isn't easy, since Itachi having passed away and all making it a little difficult...but you managed to pull it off pretty nicely. I would love to see that happen in the manga...*beggs Masashi Kishimoto on her knees*
Anyway...thank you so much for writing this, I loved it a lot. Is there a possibility that their might be another sequel? I mean, another one after "definitely wow"? I would love to read the continuation, I would especially like to see Sasuke's reaction to their relationship.
Anyway....sorry for being so annoying but I just wanted to say how much I appreciate your work.
Take care. Hugs
And it deserve a lot more of those because it is awesome, and so are you!
I love you way of writing, it's very descriptive and humorous, and that's a good combination. I read with excitement and cravings for more while occasionally chuckling at the funny puns and comments you've place in it.
And writing a realistic Naruto fanfic with the ItaNaru-pairing nowadays isn't easy, since Itachi having passed away and all making it a little difficult...but you managed to pull it off pretty nicely. I would love to see that happen in the manga...*beggs Masashi Kishimoto on her knees*
Anyway...thank you so much for writing this, I loved it a lot. Is there a possibility that their might be another sequel? I mean, another one after "definitely wow"? I would love to read the continuation, I would especially like to see Sasuke's reaction to their relationship.
Anyway....sorry for being so annoying but I just wanted to say how much I appreciate your work.
Take care. Hugs
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March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thanks
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
One of the best first fanfics I've read. Most beginning author's fall into a lot of the classic flaws of fanfiction, a little too much indulgence but not enough reality. You've pulled it off quite well. I wish this was a chaptered story, I want to see more. Especially as an ItaNaru story, I don't find too many well-written ItaNaru stories these days. Anyways, great job and I can't wait to see more from you (maybe in this story, hint hint :D).
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You did a wonderful job with the characters I think. I do love Itachi with Naruto. And I think the story of their first time would be awesome!
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* Whooo, now that was a sex scene. Kudos!