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for Gencom Naruto

by CKing

person cdog21
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting first chapter I look forward to reading more from this.
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Seems this story is gonna be funny. I look forward to read more.
person Anon
schedule May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok cool start on the story i hope to see more soon. with plenty of nosebleed worthy action hehehe
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Looks like it's going to be pretty epic, Hinata soon please!!!!

Speaking of which, the only real issue i have is with changes to Hinata like that would pretty much require eliminating most of her shy deminor, which is not only what makes her her, but that and her repressed feelings for Naruto are a big part of her sex appeal, that and her mega-tits

..::(-)::..
person Shadow65
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
update this now
person Takai153
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting idea. And so far quite amusing too! Why didn't Naruto include Shizune in his macro? Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can!!
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I sense potential, please continue.
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Tsunade, Sakura, and I can't wait when Hinata's profile comes up! (Naruto is going to have fun with her) Heck he could fix all the Hyuuga;(hmm all are natural voyeurs/x-ray eyes) Please update this one soon I like the idea of Naruto being the ultimate prankster and alter of life. Oh you can have Naruto fall under the CRA act (clan restoration act) in your story Keep up the great work!
person Ravenian
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good start, cant wait for an update!
person ecorate
schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice but what about anko kurini and shizune?