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April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Did you ever finish 'Never Leave Me'?(Please say you did) I really loved the first two chapters. ;a;
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May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story deserves an update. It sounds rather intriguing.
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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering why you ended the first chapter with "Naruto instinctively reached behind to grab Sasuke’s wrist, only a breath away from panicking as the door opened, letting out a puff of warm air and a high-pitched scream." Now I understand why. I didn't expect Naruto to be the one able to see considering Sasuke's the one with special sight in the manga. But, since Naruto's a sympathetic character, it kinda fits more. He'd try to help everyone that he sees, try to do everything he can to help without thinking how the deeds would help him. And I wonder how freaked out he'd be once someone finally tells him about it. :\
LOL, I liked how Naruto was the one who was mostly talking despite Sasuke being the one who checked into the inn. Makes him seem more docile...uke~~ *shot* And holding hands without any discomfort... I'm pretty sure that it should be (hell I'm uncomfortable when people are in my personal bubble) so just points out that they're already into each other. XD
Sasuke's a cuddler. XD And, despite being scared out of his mind, I love how Naruto's still doing his job, looking around the inn like it's an investigation. So serious about his job. :F
Surprised that the first person, other than Tsunade and Kiba, that you used was Chiyo and Sasori. Can't wait until you reveal their back story. :)
LOL, I liked how Naruto was the one who was mostly talking despite Sasuke being the one who checked into the inn. Makes him seem more docile...uke~~ *shot* And holding hands without any discomfort... I'm pretty sure that it should be (hell I'm uncomfortable when people are in my personal bubble) so just points out that they're already into each other. XD
Sasuke's a cuddler. XD And, despite being scared out of his mind, I love how Naruto's still doing his job, looking around the inn like it's an investigation. So serious about his job. :F
Surprised that the first person, other than Tsunade and Kiba, that you used was Chiyo and Sasori. Can't wait until you reveal their back story. :)
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April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so excited to read the new chapter!
It was excellent, btw. I totally enjoyed reading it. The first chapter was so amazing, I checked back every couple of days to see if it had been updated >D
I absolutely love the relationship between Sasuke and Naruto. And I think it's wicked adorable that Naruto's got a wee crush :D
And I love that Naruto has special abilities :o
<3
Can't wait for Chapter threeeee!! :D:D:D
It was excellent, btw. I totally enjoyed reading it. The first chapter was so amazing, I checked back every couple of days to see if it had been updated >D
I absolutely love the relationship between Sasuke and Naruto. And I think it's wicked adorable that Naruto's got a wee crush :D
And I love that Naruto has special abilities :o
<3
Can't wait for Chapter threeeee!! :D:D:D
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh this is so intriguing! I'm really looking forward to the next chapters!
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ohhh, very nice, I love that everyone is waiting for them to sleep together!
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Deicious - great writing. Can't wait for more. Love the AU setting and characterizations.
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like, I like!
I really love this, it captures me.
It's like "Ghost Whispere" or "The Mentalist" or whatever those shows are called.
10 bucks that the kid is dead..
Continue right away, I'm curious and is sadly not a person with much patience :D
I really love this, it captures me.
It's like "Ghost Whispere" or "The Mentalist" or whatever those shows are called.
10 bucks that the kid is dead..
Continue right away, I'm curious and is sadly not a person with much patience :D
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting..."I see dead people"
I can't wait to see what happens next!
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I can't wait to see what happens next!
Post soon
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting fic, hope to see more.