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April 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
Just want to start by saying I think this is an amazing start to what I think could be an awesome fic! I love the style of writing, I could definitely visual everything in my head like a movie. I was so sad to see the last update time though which was in 2010! I hope that you find it in your time and creativity to finish this story and look forward to hopefully (fingers crossed!) seeing an update at some point.
Thanks!
LyallFox
(An intrigued reader)
Just want to start by saying I think this is an amazing start to what I think could be an awesome fic! I love the style of writing, I could definitely visual everything in my head like a movie. I was so sad to see the last update time though which was in 2010! I hope that you find it in your time and creativity to finish this story and look forward to hopefully (fingers crossed!) seeing an update at some point.
Thanks!
LyallFox
(An intrigued reader)
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July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow I am on the edge on my seat reading this fic, I can't wait to find out what happens next! Please update soon!
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March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That promises to be epic.
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February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was curious when i saw your summary, but having read... You have something going here. i like the feel of the story, like wandering through an old movie- not the ancient black-and-whites but the muted color movies. and it's well enough written to draw the reader in- a big thing for me. if i can't "feel" the story, or see it, i can't get into it so well, but this was nice.
can't wait to see what our precious Kitsune has to say or do with the end of that scene...
can't wait to see what our precious Kitsune has to say or do with the end of that scene...
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February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ugh. Orochimaru is always so freaky disgusting. lol
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!
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February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy that you've chosen to continue the story. You write well.
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February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing. The idea of Sakura and Ino being cheap whores was funny. You have built the tension well, we will have to just see where this goes.
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February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more of this fiction. I am imagining the boys dressed in the suits that popular during that time, large lapels, wing tip shoes, fedora hats and the girls in their flapper dresses...so cool...this is one of my favorite eras to read about. The Music was so great, Big Band, Jazz, my favorite stuff!! Please update soon.
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April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is very interesting. Please update soon
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Good start, I loved studying the 20's in school and a fic based on the 20's is amazing! haha