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Seeing as you say no Kin how about Sasame

Heh, interesting enough concept. I'm glad Hinata's in for sure. I'm guessing Tenten and Kurenai have no chance?

For Meogi. Well sure she is 12 Years old, but I think the Kitsune Transformation could change that, in the same way it is planned to alter Tsunades age. So I see no Problem there.

Interesting first chapter. Can't wait to see more. Especially Foxy Hinata. ^^

Temari, Shion and Ayame all sound like great additions to me. Once you see the movie I'm sure you'll see Shion is a sound choice, Temari works for just the reasons you described, and Ayame is probably the first girl who was ever really nice to him. I'd be shocked if Naruto didn't have a tender part of his heart reserved for her. And no offense to Chouji or his fans, but I just don't think he and Ayame would make a very attractive couple, physically or otherwise. He's a nice guy, but I think he'd be more interested in her cooking than he would ever be in her.

Anyway, this story has a good start. Keep up the great work.

Awesome story update soon.

Cool story I hope you include Tenten and if you do add Tayuya have an enhanced vearsion of her CS2 (Realy her CS2 was Hot)

Nice, I think all those girls you listed are great.
Here are some girls that I would like to see: hana inuzuka or tsume inuzuka, princess yuki, hanabi hyuuga
I don't mind naruhina as long as it is in a harem. Naruhina alone isn't enough for me because she is just to shy and nice for my liking.

Well a nice story so far and I'm sorry to hear about the no dead people (otherwise I'd say Haku). A couple of ladies I'd like if you could add to Naruto's harem would be Uzuki Yugao and Nii Yugito (when your story starts she isn't dead, so if you could and just think of how holding Nibi would affect her becoming a hanyou).

Anyways keep up the good work and I hope to read more soon.

Excellent beginning!The logic your using so far seems to fit into the Naruto Universe. Your selection of Possible companions is well rounded out. One request though, please leave bondage and S/M out of this story. There are (in my opinion) allot of good Naruto fics have been ruined by the inclusion of these.
If I had a vote on whom should be included in the list of definite, I would add Tsunade. I think her past has been as hard on her as Naruto's on him. The perfect time would be when the Pervy Sage has those problems in the Rain country. (obscure reference so as not to be a spoiler.)
Thanks for sharing your Talents with us!
Skeeve

Well I do like Naruto/Sakura stuff, and where the story is going mostly. But honestly the whole Kyubi is a female and appears as a woman and gaining fox traits (Sakura's tail) has been done to death. It's totally unoriginal and I really wish to god people would stop using that idea over, and over, and over, and over, and over again. Most fics I read with that usually end up unfinished or turn lame so I've since associated a story with either of them as having gotten the 'kiss of death' for stories.

I like Sakura's new outlook but was giving her a tail really necessary for the plot of the story? Couldn't you have just not done something like that? I mean honestly someone suddenly shows up with a tail and you think everyone will be fine with it? What if you suddenly woke up with a tail how would that effect your life, that's why I hate this kind of stuff because no one actually takes the time to think about that or show in a realistic manner how something like that would effect the characters. Also we know the Kyubi is male and hates Naruto (and everything) or is even aware what goes on outside of the cage (as stated in canon) and I never understood why people end up with a DEMON being all nice and fluffy and suddenly female.

Okay maybe a certain were-cat female character from Bleach pulled it off but she wasn't evil.

I'm not sure if I can read on even though it looks like its a harem fic with Sakura in it (FINALLY!) and she's not being totally bashed by the authors like I've seen many times. There's just a few things that are really hard for me to swallow. But if I do how about Sasume Fuma from one of my fav filler arcs? Although isn't Moegi kind of too young? I mean it feels kind of deviant for someone that young to be in this with a boy that old. Anko I like but she's a bit too old and Shizune and Tsuande are more like family so don't you feel it would be a bit like incest for them?

Well sorry for the long winded thing but I honestly just needed to get that off my chest. I can take if you want to totally ignore it I just felt that someone had to say a few things but it is your story after all and I'm not telling you to do anything, just stating my opinions on it.