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February 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
HELLZ YEAH, a good old reference to one of the best games ever.
i really hope to see more of this story soon, its very entertaining, for any NEW mates to Naruto i would hope they get a simular change like Sakura did, maybe to act as a sort of a mark saying *property of Naruto* or some thing.
keep up the good work.
i really hope to see more of this story soon, its very entertaining, for any NEW mates to Naruto i would hope they get a simular change like Sakura did, maybe to act as a sort of a mark saying *property of Naruto* or some thing.
keep up the good work.
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September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you should continue the story
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September 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love the story so far, can't wait for next chapter
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August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is great. Can't wait for more.
Wish i was able to do fan art. The Naruto ladies all foxed up would be uber smexy.
Wish i was able to do fan art. The Naruto ladies all foxed up would be uber smexy.
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June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
tenten should be either a dragon or an onigumo
tayuya should be an oni
Good story by the way
tayuya should be an oni
Good story by the way
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June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Whoa this is an awesome story! I love this idea of Kyuubi getting free and Naruto and all his girls becoming hanyous. I especially like that their not all going to be kitsune hanyous. I can't wait to see how your going to execute the rest and what powers Naruto will gain from becoming a hanyou and what reprecussions this will have.
I'm gald to see Hinata is going to be a Yuki Onna, I think it totally fits her and ice would make a great addition to her Jyuuken, though I see it causing her oponents' bodies to freeze solid rather than give them frost bite. Something like Seiryu's ability from Yu Yu Hakusho. The human body is 70% water and she'd be injecting INSIDE their bodies, so thats what I see happening. Anko being gorgon is also very fitting and I like the idea of Isaribi being a Vaporeon-esque kitsune. I could totally see Tenten being a Jor?gumo (uh, what is the question mark supposed to be?), as the extra arms would really suit her. I see her as looking something like Noir from Snegoku Rance, only with all her arms being multi-jointed like her four spider arms and but ending in normal hands. If you don't know what Noir looks like heres a link: http://alicesoft.wikia.com/wiki/File:Sengoku_Rance_-_Nowaaru.jpg
As for Tayuya, she should be a succubus or a siren. Her curse seal 2 form just screams succubus to me, but a siren could definately work with her powers. I'm also glad to see that this isn't a 'Naruto gets all the girls' fic. While I love harem fics, some people go a little overboard and forget that having every woman on the planet bare the child of one man will create genetic problems with all the inbreading that would result. Granted in PWP fics thats not important as their not supposed to have a plot, but its good not to do that when your going for porn WITH plot like in this fic.
Speaking of porn, when are you getting to the sex!? I WANT SEX!!!! ;P Say, you should totally have Naruto use the kage bunshin to gangbang his girls. Ever since I saw the harem no jutsu I thought Naruto should use it to gangbang girls, but their is a SERIOUS lack of that in fanfiction (I mean he's trained by Jiraiya, a self proclaimed super pervert; how can the idea NOT of crossed his mind?!)
You mentioned the possibility of including Ayame into the harem and I really want to see that. For one, she's hot and not done enough. Two, so far she's the only girl mentioned that isn't suited for combat and when forming a harem you want to try for diversity. Also I prefer the idea of Choji being with Ino than Ayame. And Sakura seems to really like ramen now and Naruto will be getting more kitsune hanyou mates. Plus, who says liking ramen is a fox thing, why couldn't it be a demon thing? Also, if you include Tsunade, don't make her too young. Keep her at a good mature MILF age, like late 30s to early 40s. I also think Tsunade would make a good oni, as she's rediculously strong and she has a short temper.
Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can!
I'm gald to see Hinata is going to be a Yuki Onna, I think it totally fits her and ice would make a great addition to her Jyuuken, though I see it causing her oponents' bodies to freeze solid rather than give them frost bite. Something like Seiryu's ability from Yu Yu Hakusho. The human body is 70% water and she'd be injecting INSIDE their bodies, so thats what I see happening. Anko being gorgon is also very fitting and I like the idea of Isaribi being a Vaporeon-esque kitsune. I could totally see Tenten being a Jor?gumo (uh, what is the question mark supposed to be?), as the extra arms would really suit her. I see her as looking something like Noir from Snegoku Rance, only with all her arms being multi-jointed like her four spider arms and but ending in normal hands. If you don't know what Noir looks like heres a link: http://alicesoft.wikia.com/wiki/File:Sengoku_Rance_-_Nowaaru.jpg
As for Tayuya, she should be a succubus or a siren. Her curse seal 2 form just screams succubus to me, but a siren could definately work with her powers. I'm also glad to see that this isn't a 'Naruto gets all the girls' fic. While I love harem fics, some people go a little overboard and forget that having every woman on the planet bare the child of one man will create genetic problems with all the inbreading that would result. Granted in PWP fics thats not important as their not supposed to have a plot, but its good not to do that when your going for porn WITH plot like in this fic.
Speaking of porn, when are you getting to the sex!? I WANT SEX!!!! ;P Say, you should totally have Naruto use the kage bunshin to gangbang his girls. Ever since I saw the harem no jutsu I thought Naruto should use it to gangbang girls, but their is a SERIOUS lack of that in fanfiction (I mean he's trained by Jiraiya, a self proclaimed super pervert; how can the idea NOT of crossed his mind?!)
You mentioned the possibility of including Ayame into the harem and I really want to see that. For one, she's hot and not done enough. Two, so far she's the only girl mentioned that isn't suited for combat and when forming a harem you want to try for diversity. Also I prefer the idea of Choji being with Ino than Ayame. And Sakura seems to really like ramen now and Naruto will be getting more kitsune hanyou mates. Plus, who says liking ramen is a fox thing, why couldn't it be a demon thing? Also, if you include Tsunade, don't make her too young. Keep her at a good mature MILF age, like late 30s to early 40s. I also think Tsunade would make a good oni, as she's rediculously strong and she has a short temper.
Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can!
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June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I forgot to say I hope you do add some futanari, it can make for some really hot threesome/moresomes. Also, with Naruto's transformation actually turning him into a real girl you should have him use it for some lesbian play. Oh, oh, you should combine those ideas and have the girls use a futanari no jutsu to gangbang Naruko, that would be soooo HOT!
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May 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good story so far, can't wait to read more
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April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
absolutely FANTASTIC writing so far. normally harem fics skimp out on the prose, but everything you've submitted so far is quality. keep it up, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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April 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What if Tsuande after extensive research finds out that Sakura had fox demon DNA with in her. This could be confirm by Kyuubi.Kyuubi could by saying that at one time one man started to appear they started to kill the demons. The Demons decide to preserve themselves by seducing young men and women. Or by granting young men and women special powers when they helped demons. That way Sakura could be related to Shippo and the Inuzumaki clan could be related to Kagome and Inuyasha.