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you should defintly add Tsume,Tayuya,Tsunade and yugito. I am a big fan of Naruto/kurenai pairing so please add her to

I like the idea of hinata becoming a yuki because well to be honest I think that having all the chicks becoming fox like would be boring. Now on to the review, I really like this story it seems more developed than most Naruto/harem stories and I really am looking forward to seeing how the next chapters go. Thank you for a great story.

Love the fic so far.

With Hinata I know it not Japanese but why not an arctic fox. They have white, gray, and blueish coats. I say this if you want her to be a kitsune but like her with a water/ice efinity

Since they have blueish coat you can say her hair turn lighter to a light pale blue just like Sakuras hair turned dark pink

I like the idea of a Yuki onna more for Hinata. She doesn't burn so much as flow. I'm glad you're planning on using Tsume; I can only think of 4 stories that use her as a pairing for Naruto. What about Tsunami from the Wave arc? Though admittedly, that seems like something of a stretch. You know, you haven't really described Kyuu-chan beyond being a redhead. I'm usually not a particular fan of Sakura but she's considerably better in Shippuuden (then again, since I thought she was a useless bitch before the time-skip, that's not saying much). When it comes to order of addition, I think Tsume should be one of the later ones. For one, it can add some humor to it if done properly; for another, I can't easily see Tsume just throwing herself at him (well, realistically).

If you think about it your idea of a kitsune leaning towards lightning would make more sense because in one of the filler chapters Hinata actually magnitizes an enemy and electricty and magnitism are somewhat intertwined. Just my thoughts on the idea. Oh and if you add Ayame in the mix I think she would look very nice as ether a Neko (cat) or a Kitsune.

I have an idea for Hinata: combine both ideas with an Artic Fox type kitsune. Ice abilities with the fox's grace. I like the harem so far, very nice. I can totally see Kyuubi pulling Hinata into a hug after getting out and squealing about how cute she is in person. For Tayuya I say succubus/demoness, her curse mark makes it good. And if you wanted to do Anko... naga lady. Of course, if you don't want to add Anko to the harem I do think something should be done about her curse seal so it can't be used against her. Ah... and I think all the girls need a mother figure who can stay neutral in the relationships and give them good advice and break up fights in the harem. I'd recomend Tsunami, she'd probably enjoy it and Inari would love to move in with his hero. Plus, if Konoha won't accept them Naruto and his girls can move to Wave and still do missions from the Hokage.

And what jutsu from my story did you want to use?

I am glad I could be helpful. I think the Yuki Onna is a good choice for Hinata and it would blend well with her water affinity. Oh what dynomike88 said about Hinata and magnetism is a little off what she did was mess with her opponent's chakra system which resulted in the magnetic field he produced to be super charged and uncontrollable resulting in his death. Please update soon. Signed a fan of Tayuya, Hinata, Anko, Kurenai, femKyuubi, and Temari.

P.S. You should give Kyuubi a name beyond Kyuubi because Kyuubi no Kitsune is a title not a name.

With Hinata's hanyou look, go for the Yuki-Onna. It suits her skills better and she pretty much already looks the part anyway, with pale skill and eyes that strike terror in people (admittedly thats more of a general Hyuga trait rather than a Hinata trait). Still this story is looking good and i look forward to an update

I love this story already. Sakura sounds absolutely beautiful and she would be a wonderful mother to a littler of kits. I love the idea of Hinata as a Yuki Onna is fitting, she already has the looks so it would be a minimal change for her physically which may be a saving grace with her clan. For some reason Temari reminds me of the tennyo, Tanabata without her Hagoromo.

You asked about a map, Leafninja has one as well as character bios (taken from the official data books) and jutsu guides. The url for the map is http://www.leafninja.com/country.php

Awesome chapter can't wait for the next chapter update soon.