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April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good.
I like it. As for Hinatas transformation:
I would prefer the Fox Form.
A yuki Onna is also an evil creature. And I just can't think of Hinata as that.
Besides: I think the Raiton Element will go better with her Jutsu. Not only her Kaiten or Jyuken, but also for her Shugohake Rokujyuu Yonshou (in my opinion on of the best moves of the entire Series).
Besides: Don't you think she would look really cute with Fox Ears? ^^
I like it. As for Hinatas transformation:
I would prefer the Fox Form.
A yuki Onna is also an evil creature. And I just can't think of Hinata as that.
Besides: I think the Raiton Element will go better with her Jutsu. Not only her Kaiten or Jyuken, but also for her Shugohake Rokujyuu Yonshou (in my opinion on of the best moves of the entire Series).
Besides: Don't you think she would look really cute with Fox Ears? ^^
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April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Those are good choices for sure. Only other thing I could think of for Hinata's hanyou type would play to her Kekkei Genki. Something like an Eagle, Hawk or Falcon. Focusing on the eyes, and the graceful movements of her arms and legs could be like a raptor's(bird of prey) wings and strikes like the raptor's claws. Either way, keep up the good work...wanna see some NaruHina goodness!
Gotta Blast!
Gotta Blast!
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April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hello. i loved the first 2 chapters and im hoping a third will come soon. ^_^b please keep up the good work
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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it please keep going.
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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I thought of something more. you should make this have sakura be in charge of the girls once you get more because if you don't have someone in charge naruto is going to get hurt from all the fighting. cause you know there will be a fight for who if the favorite if you don't have someone to stop it cause naruto is to soft hearted to really keep strong willed woman from hurting those around them if it means getting more of what they want. just a suggestion. and i said sakura cause when pissed shes scary and if you hurt someone she loves well your in for a world off hurt.
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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story rocks hard nd lond. We need more Please.
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April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story line and can't wait for more chapters.
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April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I hope you update soon!!
BTW: Thank you for reviewing my stories, I appreciate it.
BTW: Thank you for reviewing my stories, I appreciate it.
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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a wickly awsome story. I hope the other chap's will be this good.
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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the short review. Had to start breafest. Frist off moegi & hanabi add on to list is a good idea. With them being alot older but still 2 or 3 years younger. The inuzuka women and princess yuki to the list would be good to. Trashing sasuke is always good with me. Now that is out of the way. Remaber that this is your story your work your time to shine. We are only giving you are ideas and thougts of what to do. But it is your choice not ours. The haters be dane. They say how they hate dead end stories. Butt they are the raeson that the writers stop in the frist place. Because of all the hate, bad revivws and prasure to put what others want in the stories NOT WHAT THE WRITERS WANT. That is just wrong, it is your work not ours! we read it not write it.