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June 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8: I would not have figured that that was Sai under the mask. Naruto and Hiro are a real pair. Sasuke has two wives?! I mean, I can understand the necessity but I wonder who the other wife is? Apparently, Sakura isn't too thrilled with Izanami. And what was up with her getting all friendly with Gaara, hmm? Interesting. Moving on to chapter 9.
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June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3: You can't trust genin to give you legitimate directions. Worse, they're Anko's genin so I doubt she has very high limits on "how far is too far". Her sensei was Orochimaru, after all. At least Team Asuma helped Gaara out. Neji definitely wasn't going to go easy on Gaara; I mean, this is Neji, after all. Moving on to Chapter 4.
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June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4: Ouch! Gaara should have known that mud isn't as pliable (I think that's the right word) as sand. Sand is loose and granular. While mud is wet, thick, heavy earth. Mud isn't going to move much. It's just going to lump together and be extremely gooey and generally goopy and oozy. (I think I'm making up words now. Sorry.) Shikamaru misses Temari. Sasuke's actually a good dad. I wonder what calmed Mister Avenger down? His kids are adorable. Moving on to Chapter 5.
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June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5: I didn't find this chapter awkward at all. Gaara's completely red all over. Those horrible genin have struck again. Worse, they got Neji, too. Naturally, he would blame Gaara. Moving on to Chapter 6.
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June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1: First off, thank you so much for reading and reviewing my story, "Broken Mirror" the other year. Sorry it took me so long to get back to you. Poor Gaara! How could something so horrible happen to him again? He just doesn't get any breaks, it seems. Moving on to chapter 2.
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June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2: I can't imagine how Neji and Gaara will get along in the same team. Romance in the making, I hope. So the kids Shikamaru were talking to were Sasuke's kids. I wonder who the mother is then if Sasuke is the father. Moving on to chapter 3.
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March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsomw .. please pelase update soon i would love to read mroe .. later for now
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January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
heh, wow! I just read your story, all in one go, and I must say I really like it. I hope you'll update soon, because I'm really curious about what will happen next!
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January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Admit it Neji, you're gay!
hehehe, I guess I'm one of those stalker fan-girls.. It's helluva amusing.
And Gai was trying to pair his cousin to Neji? Hilarious!
Well of course, this is a very interesting story otherwise too.
Poor Gaara! And Kankuro adn everyone...
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
hehehe, I guess I'm one of those stalker fan-girls.. It's helluva amusing.
And Gai was trying to pair his cousin to Neji? Hilarious!
Well of course, this is a very interesting story otherwise too.
Poor Gaara! And Kankuro adn everyone...
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
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October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. Please when are going to update? i find it hard to read many that don't have plots and are just silly and always AU. Why do people keep writing the same thing over and over?