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for Love Note Left Behind

by HavocTellenoi

schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
need i say sweet pairing. i love when shino gets included lol. neji was sorta cruel lol. can't wait to see what becomes of him.
person Blur
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohh~~~ poor Shino and Shika~~~

Chpt 2 is nice~
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A lovely story with a pairing I've never seen before! You have a great idea going on here, but I do have a little advice for you. For the sake of the reader, you might want to break the chapter up into paragraphs. Its easy to lose where you are when a wall of text hits you. Other than that, this was great! =3
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! I love the pairing too!!XD Yes i could tell it was Shikamaru when u said 'my beautiful shadow' i think that was a lovely sentiment on Shino's behalf. Can't wait for more!!XD I also love the outpouring of Shino's emotion and can very well picture the harshness of Shikamaru's words. I hope they can come together without hurting eachother further. ^.^
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was cute.... i liked it
short sweet and to the point...
this pairing is one ive seen only in...other situations, not like urs....

uhg....nvm, its confusing...

anywhoo....

thanks!
person blur
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope there will be more chapters! I Like this story!