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I found myself enjoying your presentation of Sakura. She's one of those characters that had a lot of potential, but just failed at proving her worth. Now, after the time skip, she's this mature individual who has fully realized her potential as a ninja... but aside from her sensitive nature towards other, she's pretty much a stranger. I'm a little behind in the manga, so things could have changed, but overall, I think Sakura is what she is and you just got to take her with a grain of salt. Not everyone should have some crazy history and perhaps you need characters with a little stability in their lives, you know. I actually have no idea where I'm going with this, so I will just stop rambling now. lol.


Your whole opening sequence with Naruto rejoicing that Hawk is staying was touching and delightful.
Keep up the great work!

Cool XD I loved the letter. Naruto gets some info about his home and about Danzou´s madness. I personally hope that he´ll end up helping Sasuke in one way or the other when my favorite raven sets out to kill the old fucker heh heh.

I love long chapters, and I must admit that I am addicted to your story. It is very well written and entertaining.

I agree with your prediction of the canon, I don´t think that Naruto will return to Konoha any time soon XD

Yay they are staying with Naruto a little while longer.

Does anyone also wonder where the manga is heading? I am kinda confused and I hope that this weeks update will shed some light on the events up ahead X3

Nice update, as always, though a little short, sadly.

Haha...adorable Sasuke!! ^^

I always find something extremely enjoyable about each chapter. You've got such a good handle on the characters and the rapport between them flows so naturally.

Keep up the great work!

Yay, a new chapter XD I love this one. It is nice to see how natural they act around each other.

I find it endlessly amusing that Sasuke likes the idea that Naruto finds him pretty. ^^ lol
Keep up the great work!

my freind and i went through this same thing to get my glasses lol. this old lady tried to make me get these large 1940's plastic frames. i almost fell over laughing lol.

It's too bad they didn't look at the frameless glasses. Some of those look invisible until you are right up on the person to see they are wearing glasses. Sasu should also get contacts for battle. Naru can sell the idea as a form of battle eyewear.

haha.. sasuke passed out in the ophthalmology chair. ^^

keep up the good work!

LOL ok, I liked this chapter a lot. I know how uncomfortable these seeing tests are since I have glasses. I adore the fact that Sasuke swallows his pride and accepts Naruto´s help. Sasuke will look hot with glasses, of that I´m sure after reading quit a few doushiji and I hope that Sasuke figures out that revenge is a futile effort, and that staying with Naruto is much healthier for him.

Affection in blooming between them, which is sweet though I wish for more romance, but i guess that´ll come in due time XD

Thank you for yet another lovable chapter,