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October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha, sasuke was freaking out and utterly shocked when two males began dancing for gay pride day. I laughed when he asked what they had to be proud of. Anyways, thanks for writing!
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October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aw, this had a somewhat cute atmosphere to it. Naruto and sasuke being so comfortably around one another was just so cute. I like how you mention Narutos true grinning smile from when he was young of which had made even Sasuke smile a bit. Thanks for writing this! I love it!
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September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's a complete cultural shock every time between them and the locals. Really funny some times and sad others. I like it a lot. It always reminds me something I througth after the chunning exams: "If they had a psycologic test to be accepted as trainners like the police in the real world, half of them wouldn't even start the Academy". They are so messed up. But they are at the same time, interesting for that.
See youn in the next one!
See youn in the next one!
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August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The legal system doesn't always work when you need it. I love Naruto's confusion at the law.
Also, I keep feeling like "OMG the police took down their information!! Word of this is going to get back to Konoha!!" lol
Keep up the good work!
Also, I keep feeling like "OMG the police took down their information!! Word of this is going to get back to Konoha!!" lol
Keep up the good work!
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August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love your work and i am realy loving the way that the story is developing insofar as the differinces between kohna and music, it makes for an interesting contrast as well as pointing out just how.... well.........silly (insane, odd??) the Naruto Universe can get at times. Any way sorry for the quick review but iv got to get back to work. stupid late hours!!!! :(
anyway your great, love you! Keep wrighting!!!!!!
anyway your great, love you! Keep wrighting!!!!!!
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August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke is so conflicted.
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August 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back!
The end of this chapter was touching as hell. :)
The end of this chapter was touching as hell. :)
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July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
There’s just no pleasing some people. LoL
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July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Re: last chapter - Excellent Chapter. I loved their long awaited coupling, and it was really heart wrenching to see Naruto cry afterwards. Keep up the great work!
This chapter: I found it greatly amusing how the political debates of Music town centered around Music Labels and popularity of music. Keep up the awesome work!
This chapter: I found it greatly amusing how the political debates of Music town centered around Music Labels and popularity of music. Keep up the awesome work!
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July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The part where Sasuke was helping Naruto with his makeup was pretty funny. Usually, men have an eye for makeup but orange lipstick? Lol, hope the pics turned out great.