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I leave for a few months and I come back to find new chapters! Yay! <3

Ack!! I'm happy and mad all at the same time. Clever you figured out a way to make Sasuke in control, but still the one to receive. I'll be honest, I totally had to skip the few paragraphs of Naruto and Sasuke's first time. The thought of Sasuke as an uke bothers me for some inexplicable reason. I'm so sorry I'm weird about that. Anyway, I thought you made their first time having anal sex very realistic. You led up to it gradually, and it didn't feel rushed or forced. And yay that they finally did it! I'm sure most of your readers are very happy. xD

I really do feel bad for Sasuke though... He wants to have anal sex with Naruto, but Naruto is able to use the Kyuubi as an excuse and Sasuke isn't the type of person (in the fic at least) to force himself on the blonde. Oh the drama!! LOL

Anyway, I look forward to reading the next chapter (though I may have to skip the NaruSasu bits).

that was lovely!!!

probably my favorite chapter.

Love the part where they were getting down and dirty on the bed but then stupid kyuubi had to ruin it all. Poor Naruto...no orgasm means no nookie? *is sad*

I really enjoyed your story. You mentioned that english wasn't your first language, but I personally thought your writing was very good; everything made sense, though a couple of sentences were a little on the awkward side. One obstical to Naruto becoming Hokage that I'm suprised you haven't mentioned is the fact that he's still a genin. I personally think that is a huge problem; even if he is the most powerful shinobi in the village I can't imagine that he would be permited to be Hokage at that rank (I only watch the anime, if this is not true in the manga sorry to waste your time). I would also like to put in my vote that if you decide to re-write this that you keep the cutting out to a minimium. I feel that if most of the non-plot related scenes were removed, the personal change and growth both Naruto and Sasuke are undergoing would be a lot less believable. As it was, I had a really tough time buying that Sasuke had opened up enough to cry at his birthday party. Please keep up the good work!

Great chapter!

Loving this soo much! Die, Danzou you bitch, die!!!

haha... library fail. ^^

Ahhh! Defensive mechanisms! Always raising their nasty little heads at inopportune moments.

Naruto's so overprotective and jealous over Sasuke. Its cute. Although people constantly questioning his way of the Ninja so negatively might not make him as keen over Music town as Sasuke is. ^^

Sasuke's found his home. Although I don't see Naruto signing up.