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for The Blessed Realm

by susanna

person Takaouto
schedule May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD, this story is so good, and so damn long!! I'm in the middle of a 2500 word essay due tomorrow, WHAT AM I DOING READING THIS?!?!?! GASJHPFLDkg:GJKAD

It just shows you how much I love you. XDDD <3 Hello! History fail. :)

Sometimes your grammar slips and you let loose a typo, but I'm really liking your writing style. ;)
schedule May 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Will someone just tell them Naruto could be bi and then everyone can be happy! lol

Keep up the great work!
schedule May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love that Naruto worries about his friend's feelings and promises made to her over anything else important.
schedule May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Could Sasuke be upset that Naru didn't tell Sakura that they were together? That's the only reason I can see for him to frown :/
schedule April 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Man, I always love it when Naruto goes all foxy at his moment of release.

Keep up the great work!
schedule April 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work!
schedule April 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm quite surprised the the washing machine was such a hassle to move. I thought it would have been easy for them. Have they gone 'soft'?
person Anon
schedule April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh man now Naruto is going to think that Sasuke is going to leave him...ugh...that's too bad.
person Nivell
schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that they're taking the time before going straight into sex. This is pretty realistic and I like it!
schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hooray!!!!

Its party time! Lets all celebrate!!! =^^= hehehe

I'm so happy they've finally gotten together! Don't let anyone knock you about the length of the story. Every chapter has been lovingly crafted and you've definitely taken the time to develop the characters fully. I love how they've finally gotten together. Taking it step by step ads to the value. Keep up the great work!