rate_review Reviews

Aw.. such a cute moment at the end there. I think you're right. Naruto will have to get used to lots of casual touching and mental adjustment before he could ever feel comfortable in pursuing a relationship with Sasuke.

Again, I loved how you ran the martial arts lesson. It was actually kind of unexpected to see Sasuke so good with kids while Naruto was so poor at relating to them, but it totally made sense. Naruto really has no concept of how an adult would relate to a child. Nor was he ever really instructed at the proper way to train or learn. Heck, despite his lofty goals and aspirations of being Hokage, Naruto probably would still have problems with basic academy kattas and forms.

This was a great chapter. Keep up the good work!

I love your story! Keep going!!

Hahahahahaaaa Sasuke almost had what he wanted but he blew it! Bwahahahaha!!!

Loser.


Keep up the great work!

What I love about your story is that it makes me think a lot. It's really informative about Sasuke and Naruto learning these new things and their world expanding without being preachy at all. And I love that they get hurt by what the other says, but don't say anything about it. It's very realistic! Though sometimes I huff and want them to apologize right now. And Naruto's dreams... and his figuring out about Sasuke. I love how gradual it is. And how much more confident he's getting. He was and is so Sasuke focused, but thinking back to how he was before and now it's like he's bloomed. Sasuke too. They're both fumbling sometimes, but then they adjust and learn. And then when they think they know something, it changes subtly again like Naruto's remembrance of the men he met before. And I have to say I'm excited for the rock dancing. Naruto would own the property to that dance floor when he learned it. And Sasuke would just have to keep up, or maybe he'd blow people out of the water.

Mrrg~! Keep it up! I can't wait for the next!

The more I read of your story the more I wish that this was the real plot and not the one in the manga.
And I find myself looking more forward to your updates than the manga translations.
And as soon as college or work dosn't take up to much time I read your story.
Keep 'em chapters commin'! *does a thumps up*

Hmm... I thought they switched rolls in flamenco because Naruto was the more outgoing and flamboyant of the two in dancing and thats a dance where the "female" role really shines. lol

Interesting chapter. I don't like your ominous comment that Naruto will realize he could be bi AFTER its too late! Don't tell me Sasuke will hook up with someone else?! Oh noes!~!!

Keep up the great work!

This story is really something. I don't think I ever read a Naruto fanfic like this before and I have to say it
really good. I really like your writing style and how you write the charaters. I love the idea of the Blessed Realm and the Ninja World.
The way you show the differents between the two is interesting. Like how the parents feel about child soldiers. I'm suprise you don't have more reviews your story it really amazing. Keep up the good work.:)

Someone should inform Naruto of the existence of bisexuality. Maybe he might be more comfortable with that concept and then Sasuke can finally get his man. >:D

I sometimes get so frustrated when I read this story. At one point, Naruto is being a complete and utter retard, but then all of a sudden, he becomes super insightful. I'm so confused. Also, I feel like I'm gonna go blue in the face waiting for Sasuke to let his confidence shine and seriously go after Naruto. I know Naruto being his retarded self makes Sasuke nervous, but no guts no glory. To me, the two of them are some of the most gutsy characters in the Naruto universe.

i really like this story. it's well written, it flows and it's just, well, nice.
There is something that has been bugging me though. It's fairly obvious that sasuke is your favourite character. Of course it's fine to have a favourite character, it's just that it creates an imbalance between naruto and sasuke. I can't really remember a chapter where naruto hasn't been humiliated and i can't remember a chapter where sasuke has been unless it was narutos fault. naruto is often portrayed in negative light, sasuke never is. Sasuke Sue gets a little dull and naruto becomes more of a joke... it's unbalanced.
i hope that makes sense...?
well, er, may you have much inspiration and motivation!