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for The Blessed Realm

by susanna

person Anon
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh geez I made a mistake. Some how I meant to review another story that had a sex scene in it and ended up leaving the review here. I guess it was obvious by the mentioning of the sex scene huh? Sorry about that...it must have been confusing for you.

I am glad that Naruto has clued in that Sasuke is attracted to him. I wish that you would have Naruto get over his "I'm better than you" complex though, it would make him more likable.
person Nami
schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
o__o *hooooping that's a bit more of a hint to Narutooo* Naruto shopping was awesome. XD I also liked the pants conversation for some reason. Naruto looking good in tight pants makes sense, but that's mostly because I think of Naruto having a butt and more muscled legs or slightly more defined, and Sasuke lacking a bit in that. That and his duckbutt and tight pants never quite fit in my head.

I really like Naruto's interaction with the guys. Actually, the earth village guy too. And the 'the only one who stares at Sasuke all the time is you' line. And oh dear me, I am looking forward to that return letterrrr e_e!
schedule February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hehehe... jaw drop Sasuke! bwahahhaaha! <3

Sasuke's allure for the women in Konoha has always been his cool, reserved, unwavering demeanor. Who could have guessed that hard, icey mask could simply be cracked by putting Naruto into some tight pants. lol. ^^

Keep up the great work!
person DeadlyTeardrops
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just wow.
Ever since I read the first ten chapters of this story I've been hooked into this story and it's world. I love it how you write out the characters and still manage to keep them IC. I really don't know what to say. After every chapter that I have read I open the window to leave review but then I hit blank. How can I tell that I love your story and all that? There are no words for that. Every time weekend rolls, I refresh the aff.net to see if the new chapter is on. New chapter to read is the highlight of the week for me. I have recced your fic at y!gal also so that other people would read the masterpiece. I have also read your other fics and I like them too. Umm, gee. How hard is it to leave review to tell the author that she is amazing? XD

Keep Up With The Good Work~!
Jade Garden aka DeadlyTeardrops
schedule February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aaah, watching Naruto begin to grasp the idea of Sasuke being gay, even while still trying to deny the possibility, is funny, annoying and excruciating. I totally LOL'd when the guy from Earth Country at the shop just blatantly told him. I wonder what Sasuke will think when Naruto shows him what he bought, and if Naruto will confront him about what the guy said. I can't wait for more!
schedule January 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Drama.


Naruto's been without love for so long that I don't even think he considers it an option for himself anymore. :/

Keep up the great work!
person Nami
schedule January 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg..... XD. Naruto. You ridiculous. It's so funny to see him blurting 'mine mine mine' and not realize what's coming out of his mouth half the time. He's the most possessive thing I've ever seen. But it makes all kinds of sense given his past. He had nothing, so admit it or not, he's never going to let go of someone important to him if he can help it. Still, I like how you allow him to be a little offensive in his dialogue with the guy. It's realistic and when I think about it in terms of Naruto marking his territory, never mind if he realizes it or not, it makes sense. It's really... interesting. Makes him three dimensional.
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol, I think Naruto has paranoia ingrained into him straight to the bone. (Although one must admit, he has good reason for that. Ha!)

Keep up the great work!
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* Naruto, Naruto...

Anyway, Sasuke's discussion with that man had me a bit on the edge of my seat, worrying that Sasuke's missing-nin status would be dredged out! I suppose it could be eventually, what with their (still vague) plans for how to return to Konoha.

I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
person Sneakyfox
schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha.. Sasuke is fully embracing his sexuality and trying to merge full swing into the community. Naruto is clueless as always. LMAO. =^^= All thats left now is for Naruto to either cling to Sasuke and bite his neck to loudly declare "MINE," or just pee on the Uchiha to mark him as his territory. Hehehehe. Its just too damn funny. :D


Keep up the great work!