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Ah, of course Sasuke would have to style it that way. ^^ I just wondered if it was slightly different, seeing as Naruto noticed specifically. :p But just him noticing is amusing, anyway, as with the addition of more gel and the red scarf during the break. xD Oh, Sasuke, you flirt. And Naruto, you adorkably possessive guy!

I had a wide grin on my face this entire chapter, either from cuteness or amusement, or a lovely mixture. :D I so love their relationship and character progression during these dance classes.

Wow, I love this story. I hope you plan on finishing it. You've worked so hard building up the story and laying down the foundation for Naruto's and Sasuke's relationship. I really would love to see you complete this fanfiction. It is truly remarkable

Naruto's observations this chapter crack me up. I wonder exactly how Sasuke's hair is done, and it's most amusing to watch him preen from Naruto's point of view. Go on, Naruto! As soon as you realize your feelings, he'll preen even more for you. =3

Ah, the dating.. I hadn't been thinking at the time of the cultural differences in dating rituals. Though, in anime, it seems casual Japanese dating is very similar to the traditional idea of semi-formal dating in the U.S., but anyway the Narutoverse isn't set even in our universe, let alone modern-day Japan, so the point is moot.

I'm really looking forward to reading their next dance lesson!

Lol. Sasuke is in his element! Look out Naruto, you're going to have to stake your claim. =^^=

Keep up the great work!

Sasuke's birthday: If Naruto had actually been able to go through with his original plans for Sasuke's birthday, I can't help but think Sasuke would have spent much of the time wondering if it meant anything or if Naruto just didn't realize how date-like it was. (of course, friends could do all those things, too, but with Sasuke knowing how he feels about Naruto... and if there were ballroom-type dancing involved.. ^^) His original plans were very sweet. Silly Naruto, you can't see how much you love Sasuke?

The effort made for Sasuke's birthday was also sweet and a bit amusing, but I totally empathized with Sasuke the whole way through. (I was sad when the mothers said Sasuke was too old for cake and candles, too. You're never too old for cake and candles. :/ ) And when Sasuke cried, I cried too. ;_;

I really enjoyed Sasuke's talk with the mothers, and learning a little bit about their kids. I had suspected the scenario described about their former marriages, so it was nice to have that confirmed. It's also nice that their talk of surrogate mothers has given Sasuke hope, too, and that he was able to talk to them about his sexuality and feelings for Naruto a tiny bit. Sasuke's thought of tricking Naruto into promising him babies that are both of theirs made me LOL. Oh, Sasuke. ALSO, Sasuke holding a child contently is possibly one of the cutest images ever--I'm tempted to say even cuter than Naruto with little kids, which is something I adore.

Thanks for the early chapter! It feels like an early Christmas present to have two chapters to read when I'm not that late in reading the update. :) Happy Holidays and Happy New Year to you!

ha! I am always on board. Although sometimes I just open all the story updates on the site in new tabs so that I can read them later when I'm on my laptop but not near internet. (Ex: Lunch!) In those cases, no reviews. Oh well.



Anyway, keep up the great work.

I'm glad that Sasuke has people to talk to about his feelings for Naruto.....I just hope that Naruto accepts him for who he is and that he gives up on trying to get him together together with Sakura...I really want them to end up together in this story.

Aww. Such a sad Sasuke. Too many memories and he can't quite enjoy himself, but then again, its his party and he can cry if he wants too. ;)

sasuke and naruto's little head to head about the love subject makes it kinda sad how they each veiw things. but i like hearing what their feelings are towards many of the things you've written them discussing. i can really see that you keep the characters in their personalities in order very well, naruto's great being a bit more mellowed out.
the letter that sasuke wrote cracked me up. i can't wait to see if sakura writes back to him or naruto complaining that sasuke's lost his mind lol.
i'm glad sasuke was able to make naruto join the same-sex competition dance group. wonder if they'll make new friends that sasuke can learn to understand his feelings from more and naruto acturally realize if he feels the same towards sasuke.
i hope you can understand all that i typed heh-heh i'm english and i don't even think i understood everything i just typed. ^^ anyways great job i look forward to the next week when you might post another. XD