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Does Sasuke even realize that he broke Naruto's heart? Maybe at this point its not important to him yet? I can so see why Naruto isn't giving in.

hey can you pleeeaaassse update i really like this story and i didn't know if you were gonna continute it or not. i was getting intrested in it. and can you add Lee/Garra and a Kakashi/Iruka paring as well?

the bag should have a really big dildo and a vibrator in it, maybe a really skimpy french maid's outfit too

Yay! I love it so far! I love bossy dommy Sasuke alot ^_^. The toy in the bag should be a sound. It's a long thin instrument which can be inserted into the penis and it vibrates causing some interested sensations. It can also be used for anal and it can be used on female urethras as well. I think it'd be a good punishment for naruto, having his penis and ass violated XD

Yay, a new chapter! I expected it to be a bit darker though. Not rape and mutilation dark but a little darker than it is. It's just a little too soft compared to the first chapter. I like Sakura as a bunny, totally suites her and I can picture Sai dressing her up in a Playboy Bunny outfit and saying something like "Suck on my carrot." That just seems like a Sai thing. Feel free to use that in your story.

I really appreciate the lack of incest between Neji and Hinata. I am not a big fan of incest. That and I love Neji/Lee. As for an answer to what should be in the bag I vote for expanding vibrator with a nub at the end. It's my all time favorite yaoi toy. Never heard of it look up 'Special bonus for hentai fans' by Atre. It's a Gundam Wing Duo/Heero fic. I've seen it in other stories but honestly Atre has the best description of it.

PS Sorry if I harshed on you in the beginning.

This is really cute and funny....I'm looking forward to what happens next!! :)

Fun toys should be in the bag...but that is just me...I really am happy with this chapter and I look forward to the next one.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I think the toy should be a cock ring.

this story is interesting i can't wait to read the next chapter and about the new pet kabuto was talking about, is it naruto?

that sux, but it's not that bad. My cpu crashed 3-4 times in the last two years because my bro needed to use my laptop since his wasn't working.