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for A new start

by sameyler

person nari-chan
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
vary good start please up date soon
person cynaga
schedule December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Needs a round with a spell checker but interesting and sexy story.
schedule December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know which anime that was taken from and I have to say I look forward to it in the Naruto universe. Thank you for a great read.
person Timber
schedule November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A New Start

This looks to be the start of another wounderful story for all of us to love and grin over!! :)

I saw the note you had about other pen names and such....I went the the web site posted but was not sure how to locate you on it.....I'm like really sucky at the computer and on serfing it.....its really sad....:(.....so would love any advice you have to help me locate your other pen names and how to access them to read ALL your works!!! I really want to read them ALL!!
GRIN!!! HAPPY THOUGHT!!! :)

THANK YOU

TIMBER
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If it'd make u feel a bit better.
Your story's a very interesting start. (^u^)
Wonder how he could escape
pls update soon
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait for the next chapter please update soon.
person Anon
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great first chapter! Please continue!!!
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love how u based it off "A Foreign Love Affair" manga. keep updating soon!!
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ack! Another story where I'm dying to see the next chapter! Cute beginning, go Naruto! Go steal Sasuke! ^^

Please update soon!
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
god i hope this post! well i am lovin it so far. i like the changes itachi as a nice guy is great. and sasuke is just to cute in the kimono. i knew you could do it great job... i will be looking 4ward to the next installment...thanxz again