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please continue this too!

Awesomeness you've got here. I tell yah, I'll review every chapter if you keep them this good^^ I really liked the idea, and the lemon.

There's only one thing I'm fearing; From what I've gathered, Sasuke is a playboy who doesn't understand what monogamy even means. That is no problem, it's not unusual or original. What I'm fearing is, that Naruto will take the role of the virgin saint. When people write "playboy!Sasuke falls in love with one of his prays"-fics, they tend to make Naruto a whining little boy who tries to change Sasuke with every ounce of his body (of course, without sleeping with Sasuke - which makes everything boooooring.)

I hope you get what I mean. I didn't mean to come off as offending, and if I did...yeah, wtf, if I came off as offending, you need to work on that on a personal level ;)

Good luck with your writing. I'll keep my eyes open and wait patiently for an update^^

HI! I am ok getting ready to escape Korea and go back home to the U.S. Then maybe if I can do everything just right I will be heading to Japan for a year or so. Wish me luck. Anyways this story like almost if not ALL of your stories as me anxious. I have to say when I got back home I was shocked to see you updated so soon. I had resigned myself to patiently waiting and hoping that I wouldn't see an abandonment notice one day. Sorry she didn't like how they were going. But for what its worth I loved her stories as well. Both of you have an interesting style so I guess there is not huge disappointment with you finishing them. I need to finish my own and there is another story line biting my brain constantly so I hope I will be able to get them both out. Maybe you could juggle the thought around with me sometime. Well I will be waiting for the newest installment of ANY of your stories. See ya.

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if the rest of the story is as good as the first chapter, i would love to read an epic fic. This sounds great, and has the potential to be a great story.

I have come to the conclusion I am a groupie for your writing. It's like I literally salivate when I read it. But now I am anxious confused and all out jittery. I must know where are you going with this? And when is your sister going to start writing again?

Yaay!! I love a story with the strong Semes being friends yet all wanting the same person.XD Yeah this will be epic im so glad u have all the players in it that u do. Especially Suigetsu, maybe he will couple with Kiba.LOL Sasuke has to let his friends know hands off of Naruto. I love that!! Will Gaara and Neji still get a small chance at some loving with Naruto? Hope so! X3

Wow how could anyone resist Neji? o.o I cant wait to find out who Naruto is seeing. i love ur Q&A at the end.

awwwwwww do you mean Shika and Temari are going to be a couple??? I usually dont have a problem with that pairing and I think it fits but the way you wrote Ino and her encounter with Shika, it just made me want to awwwwwww and have them get together, I still hope they do, I dont mind a Ino Shika pairing I think either blonde would be good with Shika, they are both Bossy lol, and hmmm I think writing about Naru's affairs with the others would be good, as you said build the characters up, but I dont like the thought of them hurting Naru like Shika fears, and I LOVE the way Sasuke told them straight out that "Hes mine" lol, but I betcha that just makes Neji and Gaara want him more huh?? those males are no doubt competitive, and why is Sui and Kiba glaring at each other??? lol, will they have a thing for each other??? ok ok enough babbling, please keep me on your update list if you dont mind, I cant wait to read more, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

I'm really liking this story so far, I liked the first chapter which lets us know what to expect from the story but still leaving a lot to be found out!!

Poor Naruto, everyone wants him. Maybe I should say lucky Naruto but I am a sasuxnaru fan so I kinda prefare them two to be togther only.

Looking forward to the next chapter, who knows what's going to happena? ^_^

hope you update soon^_^

Awesome story! I cant wait to see more of this epic fic. And with the Q&A I think adding a few small windows into their other "relationships" would biuld their character as you said and I think some people would like to see them.(I know I would. sorry for saying my opinon if it offends you)