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June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi there darl. At first I was like "oh god what a shit story and shit everything". Then I read chapter 2 and I was like ... Hm ... Maybe ... And now I can't wait for you to update! I want to read longer chapters then what you already got going... Haha =(
I'm sorry I'm just so hungover and read this fic and just wanted to tell you that I like it. A lot. I don't really love it and I don't feel it because it's very OC in sometimes a bad way, sometimes a good way.
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Q: Is Naruto going to be in a “friends with benefits” relationship with other people?
A: Yes. I’m just not sure yet if I want to write out those lemons and that particular part of the story in great detail or if I simply want to keep the focus on Naruto and Sasuke because this story is all about them. I guess writing out their affairs with others would generally build up their characters more… hmm… I’ll consider this because I still have time.
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I... That's so up to you. Do not do a vote about it just decide, what's better for the storyline? _I_ can't really say that I'd be jumping up and down in joy about you writing in a sasunaru fic how Naruto flirts with Gaara. And I know I'm not the only one. So my advice is simple really, don't put anything important there so that ppl like me can just scroll down :$
I'm sorry darling if I sounded like a real fucking bitch that totally hated your fic, SO NOT TRUE. Bring us the next chapter soon and make it longer and I'll give you a review filled with love.
electrostatic
I'm sorry I'm just so hungover and read this fic and just wanted to tell you that I like it. A lot. I don't really love it and I don't feel it because it's very OC in sometimes a bad way, sometimes a good way.
About the "
Q: Is Naruto going to be in a “friends with benefits” relationship with other people?
A: Yes. I’m just not sure yet if I want to write out those lemons and that particular part of the story in great detail or if I simply want to keep the focus on Naruto and Sasuke because this story is all about them. I guess writing out their affairs with others would generally build up their characters more… hmm… I’ll consider this because I still have time.
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I... That's so up to you. Do not do a vote about it just decide, what's better for the storyline? _I_ can't really say that I'd be jumping up and down in joy about you writing in a sasunaru fic how Naruto flirts with Gaara. And I know I'm not the only one. So my advice is simple really, don't put anything important there so that ppl like me can just scroll down :$
I'm sorry darling if I sounded like a real fucking bitch that totally hated your fic, SO NOT TRUE. Bring us the next chapter soon and make it longer and I'll give you a review filled with love.
electrostatic
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June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hehe I soo love this, Sasuke is such a man whore and I like that, he has the looks and if girls are gonna fling themselves at ya, why not take the offer lol, and poor Naru he is Sasukes new target??? Run Naru Run!....so Naru knows Itachi?? Itachi didn't do anything to him right?? he was the one who saved him at the party right??? ok loving this cant wait for the next chapter, please continue to have me on your update list if its not to much trouble??? ty ty ty, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww tachi saved naru! cute! lol
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June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
is there only these two chapters up??? hmmmm cause I seem to recall reading the second one already, awww well was still good and fun, the way Sasuke devoured Naru with his eyes, hehe too hot, anyhow please email for future updates if you can, and I thank you for the notice that was in my email today, ty ty, love the story and cant wait for more, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! I like when Sasuke's a playboy. Now they r falling for eachother but it will be Sasuke that cracks
first it seems with Naruto closely behind.LOL I cant wait to read the next chapter.:D
first it seems with Naruto closely behind.LOL I cant wait to read the next chapter.:D
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June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh i think this will be an epic story.:D I cant wait to find out about Naruto and Itachi.8-o I like that u have alot of characters in this. Will Gaara and Neji be in it as well? Hope so. Oh yeah my email address is
tawanawelch@yahoo.com and thank you for contacting us with notice of the next chapter.:)
tawanawelch@yahoo.com and thank you for contacting us with notice of the next chapter.:)
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March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lol I love how you're calling this a possible "epic fic." Those can be really really fun, as long as you don't miss a ton of updates and end up 20+ chapters behind and while you are making the valiant effort to catch up the author continues to update and you continually fall more and more behind until... well, you get the point. Not that that has ever happened to me mind you. Nope. Not at all. Never.
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Lol I like the idea of a man-whore Sasuke trying to get on the straight and narrow for Naruto, his best friend, who he is currently pounding into the bed covers. Your lemon, by the way, was very hot. very fun to picture while reading. I'm excited to read the other yummy sex scenes you've got planned for this fic. That being said, I'd like to be alerted when you update this fic. my email addy is ruri_kawaii_kitsune (at) yahoo (dot)com. I know ff.net butchers links, I'm not sure if aff is the same.
I love Naru college fics and I cant wait to see your take on college life =) I enjoyed Temari alot in this fic! I hope you update soon! I like your writing style, keep up the good work ne? =)
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Lol I like the idea of a man-whore Sasuke trying to get on the straight and narrow for Naruto, his best friend, who he is currently pounding into the bed covers. Your lemon, by the way, was very hot. very fun to picture while reading. I'm excited to read the other yummy sex scenes you've got planned for this fic. That being said, I'd like to be alerted when you update this fic. my email addy is ruri_kawaii_kitsune (at) yahoo (dot)com. I know ff.net butchers links, I'm not sure if aff is the same.
I love Naru college fics and I cant wait to see your take on college life =) I enjoyed Temari alot in this fic! I hope you update soon! I like your writing style, keep up the good work ne? =)
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March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've fallen in love with this story. I'm alomost upset that it is going to be of epic proportions, but then again, it is a most promising long ride.
I love the characterization here that you have created and the slight background of Naruto in this chapter is great. Already played with an Uchia, indeed that's seem like it is going to be a "fun" piece of the plot!
I love the characterization here that you have created and the slight background of Naruto in this chapter is great. Already played with an Uchia, indeed that's seem like it is going to be a "fun" piece of the plot!
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March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start! Go Naruto, go tame that play-boy Sasuke ^^
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
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March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this fic! How often do you plan to post bc I have def been checking back everyday since I read your first chapter ^_^ the lemon was so very hott..im enjoying the back story as well, cant wait to find out what happens next!