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April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT. They're so adorable already!
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April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
woah, woah, woah. whats orochimaru and kabuto (im assuming im right) doing here? what is it theyre looking for?!
and....an offer just like that? lol.
and please, do not be so humble... this is a really good, hooking story. the plot is very original. as i said, genius.
lol...sasuke is such a perv...thinking about naruto in a maid's outfit no doubt. lol
please update sooooon!!
*CHIBI Sango offers cookies as bribe*
and....an offer just like that? lol.
and please, do not be so humble... this is a really good, hooking story. the plot is very original. as i said, genius.
lol...sasuke is such a perv...thinking about naruto in a maid's outfit no doubt. lol
please update sooooon!!
*CHIBI Sango offers cookies as bribe*
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April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved.
Though there were a few spelling errors. Nothing to be too concerned about.
Orochimaru....and his glasses waering sidekick right?
Your not obvious in your descriptions, I just like to read inbetween the lines and think to myself "now who would I put in there?" I guess you can say we kinda think alike? Comforting or no? Hahaa!
Sasuke's blush....adorable!!!! And Naruto's reaction? Perfect!
So far, no disapointments! yay! I look forward to your next update!
Though there were a few spelling errors. Nothing to be too concerned about.
Orochimaru....and his glasses waering sidekick right?
Your not obvious in your descriptions, I just like to read inbetween the lines and think to myself "now who would I put in there?" I guess you can say we kinda think alike? Comforting or no? Hahaa!
Sasuke's blush....adorable!!!! And Naruto's reaction? Perfect!
So far, no disapointments! yay! I look forward to your next update!
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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well I am happy to finally have read this fic. I kept putting it off, and now I am sorry that I did. I really loved this. Never pictured Sasuke as a grim reaper, or Naruto for that matter so I am thoroughly intrigued.
I can't wait to see what happens when Sasuke brings Naruto back. Bet Minato will be happy at the very least.
Update soon please!
-Akiru-
I can't wait to see what happens when Sasuke brings Naruto back. Bet Minato will be happy at the very least.
Update soon please!
-Akiru-
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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow naru didn't even know he was dead. wow i would like to see a bit about how jiraiya reacted to the death, cuz it would have happened at night and for him to go wake up naru and he didn't respond that would have been sad.
that's something really hard to do. i won't wish that on anyone.
that's something really hard to do. i won't wish that on anyone.
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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOOT FOR FAST UPDATING!!!
I wasn't expecting another chapter before at least next week! This confirms your awesomeness.
I'm glad I checked it now! Actually, I wanted to ask you if you minded me copying the story on my computer. Most people don't, but some are really anal about that kind of stuff, so I prefer to ask.
Anyway, back to your chapter. I totally thought it was Kakashi. I'm glad you mande it Minato though. Kakashi would have been out of place with those Uchiha's.
And there are so few stories with him to! So it's all yayness to me!
Oh, and before you said it was Madara, I thought it would be pain. And I was like... My god, the world is in shit! The Akatsuki have gained control of the world!
But no... Well, not that this is alot better... Some skitsofrenic maniac is the god of Death.
Poor Sasuke... Not only does he hate parties... but he has to throw one for the Gods!
He should get Ino to help him.
Oh, and is Saskura going to come into the story? As like, some mythological thing? Oh! She could be the God of love (venus or something like that, sorry, I haven't revised my mythology... XD)
The pink hair would fit perfectly.
Anyway... Awesome chapter! Hope you explain how one of the gods has a living son on earth... Although, my imagination can supply me with many suppositions.
And I hope you update soon! (Still grinning about the early update!)
XD LANE
And do you know what seitz is? Amazing what they make us write to make sure we aren't aliens!
I wasn't expecting another chapter before at least next week! This confirms your awesomeness.
I'm glad I checked it now! Actually, I wanted to ask you if you minded me copying the story on my computer. Most people don't, but some are really anal about that kind of stuff, so I prefer to ask.
Anyway, back to your chapter. I totally thought it was Kakashi. I'm glad you mande it Minato though. Kakashi would have been out of place with those Uchiha's.
And there are so few stories with him to! So it's all yayness to me!
Oh, and before you said it was Madara, I thought it would be pain. And I was like... My god, the world is in shit! The Akatsuki have gained control of the world!
But no... Well, not that this is alot better... Some skitsofrenic maniac is the god of Death.
Poor Sasuke... Not only does he hate parties... but he has to throw one for the Gods!
He should get Ino to help him.
Oh, and is Saskura going to come into the story? As like, some mythological thing? Oh! She could be the God of love (venus or something like that, sorry, I haven't revised my mythology... XD)
The pink hair would fit perfectly.
Anyway... Awesome chapter! Hope you explain how one of the gods has a living son on earth... Although, my imagination can supply me with many suppositions.
And I hope you update soon! (Still grinning about the early update!)
XD LANE
And do you know what seitz is? Amazing what they make us write to make sure we aren't aliens!
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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg ur a genius!!
i love that u personified death and i LOVE ur writing style its so...spunky (is that the right word...hm...idk, its too late to look up a thesaurus)
omg ur awesome!
please update soon
*CHIBI Sango gives cookies as bribe*
i love that u personified death and i LOVE ur writing style its so...spunky (is that the right word...hm...idk, its too late to look up a thesaurus)
omg ur awesome!
please update soon
*CHIBI Sango gives cookies as bribe*
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I just started reading this story today and I must say that I was seriously thrilled! This story is definitely new and different; exactly what I needed to see! I hope that Naruto does not give Sasuke a hard time when he brings him over to the dark side!!! I can't wait to see how this story unfolds between these lonely individuals!
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And the plot progresses! You've got some fantastic ideas, and you're executing them quite well.
I hope Naruto says yes, because I'm a sucker for happy endings. Eternity to love each other (and have lots of sexy sex).
It was a real shocker to see Minato. I liked the way you wrote him, passionate and easygoing, but also serious about his job. Sounds like his son, eh? Looking forward to more.
I hope Naruto says yes, because I'm a sucker for happy endings. Eternity to love each other (and have lots of sexy sex).
It was a real shocker to see Minato. I liked the way you wrote him, passionate and easygoing, but also serious about his job. Sounds like his son, eh? Looking forward to more.