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for The Grim Reaper

by KeelarChan

person Nanin
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Seems like a great while since I've read any good stories.
It's good to see that there is still some good writers out there. :}

I love the plot and the story itself right now.
I'm hooked.
person Mija
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, that was amazing! I thought Kakashi but when you said Minato I was like OHHH I could soo see him teaching Kakashi that when he was their sensei hehe, and of course it did throw me I was so suprised but i LOVED it, hehe, and he kicked Madara out of HIS seat, omg that was so priceless, what did Madara do to get a demotion?? and what did Oro do to get the demotion?? Minato's anger was soo cool too, death God or no, he was pissed that his son was supposed to die, and murder to boot?? who wanted the blond dead?/ thoght everyone loved him?? ooh I soo have to read more, cant wait I am still soo loving this fic, more soon, *bats eyes in pleading anime fashion, or puss n boots from Shrek* hehe...ty for the awesome read and fast update, much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! O.O
This chapter was pure greatness! You shocked the hell out of me!
I would never have thought that Minato would show up like that and become the God of Death, that was a great surprise. Especially with the sentence he first uttered, I thought it was Kakashi at first. ;) However, I suspected that the Uchihas, at least Itachi, would be one of those who Sasuke would have to face and I was right. Yay! *does a happy dance*
Anyway.....*cough*....I wonder what Naruto's reaction will be like and if he will accept the offer of becoming a Reaper...
And I'm sorry for not having reviewed each chapter, but I've been a lazy ass. Sorry...*winces before the slap that comes her way*
As I've stated before, this truly is an incredible fic, you've done amazing job. Thank you for writing it and updating so quickly!
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs =^_^=
person TheWidow
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I still like where this is going, you haven't dissapointed me ^.^ And don't worry about the lemon.... no need to ruch the anticipation ;) And may I add a thought about the lemon? is it NaruSasu? or SasuNaru? Personally I'm a fan of NaruSasu but either way works.


My babbles and guesses for The Gods of Death: They're either the Last Hokages and Naruto's dad is on it and like theres a big commotion of his son being with Death? Or Itachi's on it with Orochimaru and Orochimaru says no to Sasuke's idea because he wants him for himself? Or Kakashi and Iruka? ......I could go on for days but I'll leave you with that though this time, I think I'm way off on my guesses. I write nothing but drama/angst/romance. Lol, sorry about rambling.

Anyways I like it and wait for the next update!
person LadyWolf
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
gods of death: itachi, Kakashi, Gaara,

Maybe???

Post soon!!
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i'll be sure to follow this fic. very interesting. hmm know for sure oro is a god of death. not sure who else there will be. maybe pein? itachi? madara? hmmm i'm not sure ^_^
person Munez
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so hooked on this story.
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, sorry for reviewing on this chapter, since you've already posted more, but I like to give my first impressions.
So this is for chapter one.
First of all, Terry Pratchett is ace, and mort is awesome. Good reading choice!
And second of all, you do him justice.
I think that's all I need to say.
(You're right, Sasuke does make a good Death.)
XD LANE
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I'm a stupid reader. If you don't tell me something, I'm seriously bad at guessing.
So you have to update soon and tell me who the gods of death are.
I liked you r corretion (stumbled -no - glided). It was funny.
And the fates are pretty awesome too... I loved Hinata. And Ino. Tsunade was tsunade...
are the gods of death Uchiha's? You know this is going to bug me right? Now that you said I should have guessed.
Righty ho, well, I've got to get some sleep, unfortunately.
Oh, and I'd think that you were one of my best friends, because she writes in about the same style as you and also likes terry pratchett, but I just remembered that she doesn't like SasuNaru. So you can't be her. XD Yay! I don't have to threten you with murder for not telling me that you were writting this!
Okay, now I've demonstrated I'm a weirdo, I shall ask you once again to update soon (UPDATE SOOON!!!) tell you once again that I love your story and your style (I love your story and your style) and take leave of you.
XD LANE
Did I say you should update soon?
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think you made excellent choices in this chapter, very creative thinking. I applaud you.