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for The Grim Reaper

by KeelarChan

person TheWidow
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Madara!!! Ah, how I miss that one? But I was right about Orochimaru, Itachi and Minato! I think ....

I loved the part where Minato told Madara in a nice way 'get the hell out of my seat' Atleast that's what I heard when he made that joke to Madara ^.^

I still like where this is going, my thoughts haven't changed but if they do, I won't hesitate to tell you my likes or dislikes.

I like being truthful with people.

I would hope someone would tell me their dislikes...I might be wrong.

Anyways Kepp up the good work and I look forward to the next update!

p.s. I never thought of the switch part for SasuNaru and NaruSasu. Interesting! I can't wait to see how things turn out!
person Mija
schedule March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Obvious??? omg I am so clueless...Gods of death...hmmm Itachi? Pein and Orochimaru? They seem creepy enough to be Gods of death lol, anyhow oooh my gosh, the punishment is here, and what is Sasuke thinking??? And if Naruto stays in his body it will rot while he lives in it??? but why?? and how did Naru die anyway?? He just went to sleep, was he supposed to have a heart attack or something??? soo many questions and I cant wait to find out more...oh oh the council will be the Gods of death huh?? lol I'm just guessing, they seem to always be the judging kind...stupid council lol, anyhow thanks for the wonderful read, cant wait for the next chapter, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person TheWidow
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I generally liked the idea of the fates. the Photo album represented to the pictures of the past. The Phone means you can connect with all the latest (present) news. And the book is the not knowing the end (future).


I like where this is going and if my discription is wrong on your potrayal of the Fates, sorry about that but that's what I see.
person Vesca
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting!! I look forward to seeing this story develop.
person Mija
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hehe I like it, I think the fates was such a GREAT idea and omg having Ino be a fate was soo good, I can just pictuere her, I can see Tsunade and Hinata, they seem to fit, but Ino?? bold choice and a good one, loving this so far, but if the fates can only show him someones life, how can they help him with the WHOEVER it is that hes in trouble with??? ooh I cant wait to see who that is and what he will do hehe, ty for the read, hope to read more soon, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice, I can't wait to see where you take this, I'm anxious!
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Coolness.
person Munez
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this so far. It's original and intriguing. Update soon, yeah?
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really liked it! And putting the "Fates" in the story was brilliant. Sasuke the 'angel of death' perfect! I really liked your way of describing the things that we as a reader need to know, and thank you for not going over board. I think that any more detail would have made the pace too slow and would bogged down the story. Your pace for the story is just right (not too fast but not too slow). Thank you for a great story and I can't wait to read more.
person Mija
schedule March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmmm nice, I like it so far, but from what Naruto stated about his life, he doesnt seem to be some superhero or possesor of majic, is Sasuke dissappointed??? I must know more, cant wait for your next update I hope it is soon..ty for the read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)