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January 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I have to say it was a good story. Though you should fix all the line spacing and what not it makes it look like crap. Also you use the "mate" term way to much. Sorry but you overkill it.
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December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story = EPIC WIN
I will admit, though I be a Shino/Sakura fan forever, Naru/Saku is my favorite likely pairing. Plus they just complement each other so well...I bet it was easy to write something so touching about the two. Loving the raunchy sex. Heh.
I will admit, though I be a Shino/Sakura fan forever, Naru/Saku is my favorite likely pairing. Plus they just complement each other so well...I bet it was easy to write something so touching about the two. Loving the raunchy sex. Heh.
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August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Very Nice. But I thought you would build in a showing of Sakuras new Power, before the end. Maybe in a last attempt by Sasuke and some surviving Root nin to take Naruto out?
Well it is just an idea.
I like this story very very much.
Well it is just an idea.
I like this story very very much.
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August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter!!! Fantastic exposition.
Keep up the great work!
Keep up the great work!
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August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I now have a problem... the Hiraishin (better known as the flying thunder god technique) is made the way it is for a reason. most everything in Naruto is based on a very loose equivelent exchange system, you can use abilities to fly an teleport, but at a cost... the Hiraishin is set though the use of seals, making it somewhat like the replacement technique only without the moving of a different object, however, it would still require some sort of object or a very harsh penalty for using it.
other then that, the story is getting better and better
other then that, the story is getting better and better
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August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome battle and ending!!!!!!!!!!! I seriously can not wait for the next chapter. ^^
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August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well... that's one way of announcing to the world that you're the son of a legendary being
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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More!!!!! Please!!! I love it!
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's not gonna be pretty. It wil be glorious. Nothing like true carnage to bring out my inner-self; just ask Alucard-sama
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the last chapter was superb, please keep this story going as much as you can