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May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I nearly forgot.
I assume the last element there is will be a surprise for us? You explained Darkness, Light and Void as the additional Elements Kyoko controls. Since Kyubi has one more tail, so what is the last element?
I'm eager to find that one out.
Thank you again for your great work.
I assume the last element there is will be a surprise for us? You explained Darkness, Light and Void as the additional Elements Kyoko controls. Since Kyubi has one more tail, so what is the last element?
I'm eager to find that one out.
Thank you again for your great work.
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May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very Good idea. I like this. Sakura with her own fox spirit. Hehe. The reaction of their friends should be interesting.
Keep up your good work. It is apreciated.
Keep up your good work. It is apreciated.
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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this. ^^
Keep up the great work!
Keep up the great work!
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April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This gets definitly better. Intersting characters I must say ^^.
I', eager to read more.
I', eager to read more.
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok. You you did it. I'm very curious now about where this story is going. You have my full attention.
Very good work so far and great idea to handle Naruto's "furry little problem".
I'm eager to read more about this.
Excellent work.
Very good work so far and great idea to handle Naruto's "furry little problem".
I'm eager to read more about this.
Excellent work.
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Just wonderful! I love both of the chapters and I really hope for more. Please continue on your excellent work. Your awesome! :3
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April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
holy shitttttt motha fuckin updatteeeee!!! Good work I say and I couldn't help but giggle when I saw "Spirit World" and "Demon World" reminds me of Yu Yu Hakusho but regardless has sparked a great interest for me to further read this story which is very exquisite few grammar problems and such but who cares. Good work overall! :)
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April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I read the first chapter. I want to say that I really liked the first half of the story. It was wonderful. Once I hit the sex part it felt a little cheesy/romance novel. Then I skimmed until the anal sex and thought that it could use a little work. I really hope you keep writing, because you have a knack with setting up a story, I think the lemon just needs a few changes to keep Naruto and Sakura more in character and a little less porn-like (and not good porn, but bad bimbo/slutty porn). ^__^
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April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well crap you ruined this story for me, I was really enjoying this as there are hardly any decent Naruto/Sakura stories but my hopes are destroyed with the ending of Chapter 2. I HATE the kind of crap that was in this, with the fox being something like a 'summon' animal or it wasn't evil which totally ignores all canon parts to the story. Why the hell did you have to go and do something like that? The story was fine the way it was and there was no need to ruin it by doing something that's been done in every baddly written story in Naruto I've seen.
That plot device is just so overused and I thought you were a better writter than that. I mean everything up to that point was going great and I was about to leave a good review on how much I enjoyed the story but now I can't even look at this anymore.
That plot device is just so overused and I thought you were a better writter than that. I mean everything up to that point was going great and I was about to leave a good review on how much I enjoyed the story but now I can't even look at this anymore.
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April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was one really unique plot twist... I like your inturpritation of the Kyuubi's power and making it incorperate with Naruto's abilities. Not only that, but it gives a little more depth to the story. Also, ignore what AgentG has to say, if he can't handle a plot twist he can go elsewhere, this is called Adult FANfiction, not your fiction AgentG.