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hmm, very good. naruto learning through a (to me) new way, and having his home and inheratance with him.
rather well written, and looking good future prosbect. hope you update it soon.

Read this chapter and enjoyed it so far. Looking forward to reading more chapters as you post them. I hope that you have some plans to write a bit about what happpens in Kohona (just the basics - the reactions of the Third, Iruka and anyone else that truly knew/cared about Naruto). One point that puzzles me is the number of scrolls you had Naruto seal out side of the house since he took the house (and contents) with him seems excessive he could have taken one or two and then changed them out later on. :) Oh well not a major thing. I think I will check on if you posted other stories to the site now. :)