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for Bloodlines

by Usha

person blasterblurby
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very Good ^.^ I can't wait for more!
person Feion Phylar
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wooot! Another chappie~
I love how they were all betting on Sasuke and Naruto getting together. I like I like, I think Sasuke would (should) make the first move, and I know Naruto will be the first to recognize his feelings.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
person Feion Phylar
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I WANNA RIDE A FREAKING HORSE!

I knew nothing about Jockies, Horses, Races or anything about this subject until reading the fic. And WOW, I am so inspired I love it. This is SO ORIGINAL that I have to totally lift my hat off to you. This is what Original AU fanfiction is all about baby. You have captured Naruto, Sasuke, Itachi, everyone in a time period and place and convinced me. Completely and utterly.

The love/hate boyish romance is sweet and tastefully written. I am a personal fan of watching manly egos bump and flarekeeping to keep the manly feel to it that I personally feel defines Naruto and Sasuke's relationship. Nothing like a fight to tell a dude you love him or some macho BS in the stable to get me going.

In conclusion, I know this might sound over the top, but this is to me the best new SUMMER fic out right now. There has been a of tasteful works and yours definitely makes me look forward to updates.

*Drools* Just stare at Naruto's bubble butt, Sasuke. It's alright. We all know he's got a fatty.
person Yami_Gin
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot. I love horses and do ride. I also love the names you've been giving the horses. I laughed when I read some of them. It's funny are all the horses sasuke rides gonna be named after the akatsuki members? That would be kinda funny. I definently agree with Naruto about horses feelings. They understand far more than most people give them credit for And you'll never get their or your best until you can learn to communicate with each one individually. Than pretty much nothing can stop you. Though it helps when your racing to pay attention to ones surroundings and knowing where the other horses are.

Till next time
Yami
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I love horse fics beaucause truthfully, I like all the new terminology.

Usually I'd be saying, "HURRY WITH THE SMUT!" right now, Sasuke and Naruto's relationship is developing very slowly and realisticly and I like that. Very entertaining.

Can't wait for the next chapter! ^^
person Anon
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
**Sry some typos in the last review**

Oooh, I love horse fics because truthfully, I like all the new terminology.

Usually I'd be saying, "HURRY WITH THE SMUT!" right now, but Sasuke and Naruto's relationship is developing very slowly and realisticly and I like that. Very entertaining.

Can't wait for the next chapter! ^^
person Kuno
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the whole idea of this fic, and your writing is really enjoyable to read. I can't wait to read what happens next.
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow for me this is a new perspective on the au. this is really interesting. and i really like horses too ^_^
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. You're an excellent writer.
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I finally finished reading this on FF.net. I love this story!